Before the Gates of Alahsar - Version - 2 - 7

Chapter..........1..........Part..........1..........4.

Now, mighty ones, 
I return to sing the song of Alahsar,
now, come with me,
once more, let us stand in the priceless dream,
like the eagles, high aloft,
let us fly now too Dream-Scape.
A great wall stands,
ever impenetrable, 
this outer wall to kingdom,
it stands firm,
within the great wall,
the largest, silver gates we behold,
this is where the song does take us,
now, let us see what we shall see,
let us watch the scene unfold.

We see many soldiers of the outer guard,
armour shining,
they stand watch at the outer gates,
Now, listen, a great hammering on the gates,
something hard strikes four times on the gates,
then a short break,
this repeats, time after time,
the signal of the enemy dignitaries,
outwith the gates, 
in eternal darkness,
these damned souls awaited entry.
the gates are slowly opened,
soldiers now stand expectant,
mighty hands on sword hilts,
spears at the ready,
shields held tight,
the great silver gates,
they open slowly to the darkness,
a gasp from the soldiers of the golden king.

These mighty soldiers,
they now take a step backwards
out of the darkness,
eight spider riders of Akrah,
they advance, 
they come forth on their gigantic spiders,
shudder now at this sight,
slowly, these abominations,
they did come into the light.
soldiers of the golden king,
they begin to retreat,
stand tall, men of Alahsar,
the order of the golden king,
let them pass, these loathsome beasts,
The gates stood atop a hill,
at the bottom of this hill,
one hundred of the elite knights,
the Captain and ten others, 
they did splinter from the group,
ascending the hill.

The mighty bastions of Hellish design,
they move so slowly forward,
eyes of amber putrescense,
aligned on head,
perfect sight,
poison fangs begin dripping,
food so close,
bodies of the most mighty bulk,
carried with such hateful ease,
eight mighty legs,
they carry the weight with ease.
True, dark-haired demons,
born of the darkness,
what fear they do instil,
their leader, on the first spider,
he pointed a long finger at the captain,
Slowly, the spiders moved in line,
towards the Captain, their Hellish march,
when the head rider was up behind the Captain,
they all started down the hill,
Let us now follow this strange procession.

To Be Continued..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/4/2019 8:22:00 AM
I’m always amazed at your imagination. You give Game of thrones a run for its money.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/5/2019 4:53:00 PM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad that you like Alahsar. This write comes from the part of my brain that shall always be a child's. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Blessings....Mike.
Date: 10/23/2019 12:04:00 PM
I am really happy you are posting these again, so others can have a read..
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/24/2019 9:51:00 PM
Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you enjoy the write Silent. It isn't realkky bothering me that only a few people want to read this piece. I am actually writing this one for myself. I always promised myself I would. Have a wonderful Friday. your friend always....Mike.
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