Before the Gates of Alahsar - 2nd Version - 1

"Before The Gates Of Alahsar,"
By,
Michael .P. Clarke.

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Bardic style.

Chapter..........1..........Part..........1..........1.

Come now, my Lords and Ladies,
listen now to the tale I shall tell,
the ancient tale of the dreamland,
of Alahsar, I lay before you.
look now within your mind's eye, 
look on the golden gates to peaceful shrine,
they stand in wonder,
before a city of joy and peace,
a most ancient jewel.
I, your Bard, stand before you,
my words, I am ready to sing,
my beating heart of truth,
it shall beat the tales cadence,
as my words, I do speak.
Oh, Alahsar, your dream forever sung,
I lay it forth, following ancient texts,
come now, my Lords and Ladies, 
listen to the tale my heart shall tell.

Never, had there been dark, in Alahsar's jewelled kingdom,
the sky afire, with a golden glow, in a night of lightened twilight,
all night, this sun would lie low in the sky, a golden glory,
this light of love, ever touching the beating heart of Alahsar.
The sun did sparkle off golden pinnacles and minarets bejewelled,
the sun, kissed gold so gently, and golden light did live,
my Lords and Ladies, such a dazzling display of light effects,
forth did come the rainbows of dream's desire.

Upward, ran the virgin white, stone dwellings, of the city,
they did tower to such heights, they reached for the heart of Heaven,
open your minds to the vision, look upward, upward, ever upward,
atop the great city, a golden palace, how that glory did shine.
This was a golden beacon to all, that Alahsar did live,
the city of dream, in its golden coat, arrayed, it did sing dream's song,
from the golden gates below to the golden palace atop, peace and joy did reign,
Alahsar, sing dreams song in majesty.

On the first level, the dwellings of Alahsar's mighty armies,
of the most sumptuous furnishings, they were arrayed,
seem within your minds, soldiers dressed in such regal splendour,
those on duty, they walk proudly. from dwellings to the mighty parapet walls.
They all know nights of passion, in rooms of silken beauty,
primal passion, emitting sighs and screams into the night
communal wash areas were to the rear of these dwellings,
they were behind high walls, built into the rock itself.

To Be Continued...........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/15/2019 10:30:00 AM
Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/4/2019 10:53:00 AM
Hi Funom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this first part of the second version of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. this tale is taken from a recurring dream I have had since a child. It is something I enjoy writing. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend....mike.
Date: 9/15/2019 11:31:00 AM
Your poems are beyond excellent - your imagery soars and takes us back to Robin Hood, Sir Lancelot, King Arthur, King Henry V111 and even Shakespeare and Hamlet and Macbeth - you take us back in History! Well penned dear Mike. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 9/16/2019 4:33:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, Thank you for dropping by and the like on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. My thoughts always seem to take me far away from the present. I think I should have been born in an earlier time. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/11/2019 12:04:00 PM
Goodie! More to come yay! As always I enjoy your way of expressing yourself. Blessings Richard.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 9/12/2019 8:32:00 PM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this first part of the second version of Alahsar. It is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. As always, the first few stanzas are just a small description of Alahsar. A larger description comes in the third version. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/11/2019 1:21:00 AM
you whisk me back to the court of King Arthur with your magical imagery, so glad you are back on soup Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 9/12/2019 8:15:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of the 2nd version of Alahsar. It is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Beyond time we go, to the time before time. Alahsar, the dreamland did shine bright. These first stanzas are just a few on Alahsar. I am glad to be back Jan. Have a wonderful friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/10/2019 11:03:00 PM
Vladislav, you have certainly set the scene for a magnificent tale with this fantastic imagery.....
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 9/12/2019 8:05:00 PM
Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this part of the 2nd version of Alahsar, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Just a few stanzas on Alahsar before the tale does start. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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