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Before I Curl Up Like a Rose Abandoned

Meandering in ocean breeze, love pondered romantic themes Cherishing each other's company, early days saw happy dreams Boasting vibrant sunsets we strolled, charming ardent evenings Wallowing depth of loving embrace, longing to hold till eternity Things soon changed, as cosmic paradise became a sullen sky When bewildered stars saw you depart without a hint of sigh Abandoning me on a lonesome path hurting my doting pride Never uttering a word of regret, having left without a goodbye Now you arrive, uninvited, reminiscing in days of fervid hues As foolishly I discard my heart's protest, saying our love's true Demanding a response from someone whom I so dearly knew: Anyone who had a heart would love me too. Why won't you? Indulging in my love you evoke passions deliberately tantalizing Arousing memories we left behind when dawn was still rising Claiming your place as beloved, finding comfort in its meaning As I let you steal my kisses willfully, blown fondly from my lips Forgive me I won't, upon quiet reflection, for what I've done Allowing you to fool me again at the urging of genuine love Condoning you hiding behind the faceless stories you've spun Wanting your attention before I curl up like a rose abandoned June 24, 2018 Placed 2nd in Cilla Black contest by Teppo Gren Song: Anyone who had a heart

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Valsa George

Date: 5/5/2022 6:35:00 PM

Wonderful write.... Love and Rejection are two eternal topics in the book of life ! You have expressed both these in a masterful way. With your deep understanding of human nature and love's varying shades, you have created a masterpiece here. Vijay, I envy your mastery over the art you are handling.....

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/28/2018 11:49:00 AM

Hi Vijay, seems like much belated congratulations have to be sent your way again. Much deserved for this excellent write, emotions glowing, painting love's pictures, whether happy or sad the emotions are real and fall so easy onto the page from your golden pen. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike..

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/13/2018 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2018 10:29:00 AM

BIG Congratulations, my friend, on a huge win with this excellent emotive piece! BRAVO! Best regards. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/29/2018 11:54:00 AM

"Forgive me I won't, upon quiet reflection, for what I've done"! the line I'm waiting for! Standing ovation for your masterpiece! A wow for your exquisite write! A bow to the beauty of your message! An immense pleasure while reading! Definitely a FAV. You are outshining! Thank you so much for sharing dear Vijay.. Stay safe and blessed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 3:42:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your comments..many thanks, Besma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2018 6:27:00 PM

You really took that challenge to heart!! I think the sponsor of the contest is going to be very happy to see what you did with the topic. I sure hope I can follow suit!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2018 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate the comments, as always. I am looking forward to reading your entry for the contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/26/2018 5:04:00 PM

Anyone who had a heart would love me too. Why won't you? A lifetime of questions from lovers all over the world, We can't make a heart feel what it doesn't want to feel. Loved your poem dear poet. gl in the contest

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2018 6:46:00 PM

Thank you Pixie..really appreciate your visit and kind words.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/26/2018 9:41:00 AM

Vijay, this is an EXCELLENT, moving description of a heartbreaking situation! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2018 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Janice--appreciate the kind feedback, as always.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/26/2018 6:12:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, This is exceptional piece for the contest. Good word choices and theme. Your complimented the song very well. I found your write to be poetic as well. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2018 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Alexis..delighted by your visit and kind feedback.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/25/2018 8:15:00 PM

Strange the things we do for love...Lovely write...very true too...All the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Arturo.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2018 3:14:00 PM

ohh, the pain of love denied, vijay... a brilliant write from your pen!.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you nette..always delighted to read your comments.

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 2:25:00 PM

Wow... so many fantastic lines in this one.. great rhymes and great imagery..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Silent One for the kind feedback.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 8:01:00 AM

Vijay, this is my favorite write of the morning. Everything about your poem is exceptional.. word choice, clever lines, emotions you can feel, and great creativity on the theme. I'm super impressed and enjoyed reading this a few times!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Lyric Man..always delighted by your visit and wonderful feedback.