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Before and After

I didn't find PSoup, no, PSoup found me I was a poet from my birth, just not the poet I could be Before coming to PSoup, I was a message poet with my own style; the words I delivered could make you sad, could make you smile I could make you sit down, I could make you dance I could make you want to throw hands, I could make you want to catch romance I knew how to mix my words, I knew how to adjunct nouns, adjectives and verbs And heaven help the poor soul that got on my nerve All that being said from the son of a poet king, a true poet knows that he doesn't know everything Before coming to PSoup, in terms of poetic forms, I didn't have a clue, I didn't have an inkling Terza rima, what??!! Sapphic stanza, who??!! After coming to PSoup, I found out there were so many poetic forms I never knew But this is the best tasting part of my unlearned fondue, I got to sample some mighty fine poetry from the minds and hearts of all of you So many styles and variety: haiku and senryu, sonnet and ballad, choka and jeuju, villanelle and etheree I truly thank PSoup, It has broadened the stroke of my pen I can now put my message in whatever size bottle that words can get stuffed in

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Date: 10/25/2016 2:50:00 AM
Haha, here here RW. Same same! The soup is king and queen me thinks! Well said Freddie.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/26/2016 3:18:00 PM
Long live the king and queen, right. Ty Rick for the love and support. Much love to you. RW
Date: 10/24/2016 11:13:00 PM
Before coming to the soup I was an artist painting with but a single brush. By learning different forms I am able to articulate my thoughts with greater clarity. I very much relate to this piece Freddie.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/26/2016 3:17:00 PM
Ty, Richard for the kind words. I feel the same way. Love you, brother. RW

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