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Before Age

Before Age Effort and nutrition went in vain today Knitted poem vanished in a click of finger A question emerged in genuine mind Who bloody ate up the beauty of poem today! Fumbling fingers in the history of record Whether shattered hopes can get rebirth today Tired eyes advised shut up computer now You can not write poem diversifying today Knowing 'Linda' will not be happy in this Beauty and diversification advised leave 'Dear' today.

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Date: 4/28/2016 11:26:00 AM
This reads innovative to me Deepak.... Cooool write....
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:25:00 PM
Nice concept & well penned........with love.
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Deepak Chalise
Date: 4/25/2016 5:44:00 PM
Manmath When Dear like you promotes, my spirit gets to do ahead. Thank you very much.

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