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Before Age

Before Age

Effort and nutrition went in vain today
Knitted poem vanished in a click of finger
A question emerged in genuine mind 
Who bloody ate up the beauty of poem today!

Fumbling fingers in the history of record 
Whether shattered hopes can get rebirth today
Tired eyes advised shut up computer now
You can not write poem diversifying today

Knowing 'Linda' will not be happy in this
Beauty and diversification advised leave 'Dear' today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/28/2016 11:26:00 AM
This reads innovative to me Deepak.... Cooool write....
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:25:00 PM
Nice concept & well penned........with love.
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Deepak Chalise
Date: 4/25/2016 5:44:00 PM
Manmath When Dear like you promotes, my spirit gets to do ahead. Thank you very much.

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