Before a Cloudburst

Black cloud mystery! Shadows on the mountainside! Moving in twilight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/27/2010 4:43:00 PM
ohh. love this poem. so dark & beautiful.
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Date: 1/26/2010 10:38:00 PM
Great images shine in the darkness of this write. It is beautiful the natural beauty of an incoming thunderstorm perfectly. I feel it could also capture the sadness in ones spirit on a tough day in life while the last line leaves hope for Spirit to makeeverything alright again. Thank you for sharing. This one goes in my favs. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/26/2010 9:13:00 PM
This is a great haiku, marty. Glad I caught it on my way off here LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 10:04:00 AM
I read this excellent poem of yours today and I enjoyed it Marty. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:21:00 PM
U are most welcome.. now click on over to "Lady of the Evening".. see how that sits with u... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:33:00 PM
Good job.Very mysterious but I can just picture it. BG
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:46:00 PM
excellent mysterious Haiku, Marty. Always a pleasure reading. Robert
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:42:00 PM
Sounds very mysterious but so beautiful... luv your title too... am working on one of my "scorchers" for u... also a 3 way collab with Jared and his friend Sam... look for that one soon... aim to please .... enjoyed very much... want to make this one a fav ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:57:00 PM
Bombastic Haiku..Excellent burst in verse..tnks for your kind comments Marty,:)Charma
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:56:00 PM
Strong start to this splendid Haiku.... I really like the first line... Very good my friend...:JP]
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:32:00 PM
Great descriptive Haiku. This time just before the storm can hold a whole range of emotions. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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