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Before The Day Turned Into Night
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
01/28/2024

                              

Before the day turned into night, a scarlet sun inked clouds of white. And tinted the sky with red light; a cotton candy pink delight. Before the birds lose light to fly, a murmuration fills the sky. Mesmerized, I let out a sigh, applauding as they shapeshift by. Before the shadows merge, as one, twilight drinks the last of the sun. And though dusk has barely begun, a rising moon won't be outdone. Before night's dark curtain descends, silhouettes form as daylight ends.

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Date: 3/28/2024 12:02:00 PM
Light and airy Emile. Your imagery is stunning. Congratulations! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/29/2024 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/27/2024 9:56:00 AM
An excellent enty and poem, congratulations
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2024 3:31:00 PM
Thanks, Terry, as always, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/26/2024 9:48:00 PM
Emile, a beautiful description of that awesome sky. Another top-notch write from your magical mind and imagination. Congratulations on your top win my friend. Charlie
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2024 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Charles, as always, I appreciate your comments and the placement, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/29/2024 3:42:00 PM
Hello Emile, I look to the sky often. i never know what i would see there. The sky is always different. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene./
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/30/2024 8:13:00 AM
Hello Emile, Your welcome my friend. I read your poem again and made it my fav., Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs