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Bees, Birds and Butterflies

Heart is a neglected garden, diseased by an epidemic of weeds. Breathless, pining for your breaths - breathe passion into me so bees, birds and butterflies return. Cultivate soul with tender hands, propagate seeds sensually. Fertilise fragility with soft kisses, form a vision of Eden so bees, birds and butterflies return. Upon dawn's delight of delicate germination, intimately indulge deep into sensitive roots. In storms shelter in an evergreen embrace. In drought replenish like sacred drops of mercy so bees, birds and butterflies return. In what has become a monochrome existence, paint a masterpiece of magnolia meadows, flowing with amber, clementine, crimson and lilac petals. For this body is yours, do not let it linger in decay so bees, birds and butterflies return.
Sunday simple musing Silent One 5 April 2020
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Crabtree Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 1:56 PM
I love the way you've combined nature with yourself in this. I can always see in my mind what you've created with your words :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 1:01 PM
A brilliant write! Love it!
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Spring is truly alive ... when your loved one makes you feel whole. A beautiful extended metaphor that gradually became more vivid as the poem progressed. Much enjoyed.
Brul Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 11:24 AM
This is a masterpiece! Superb imagery! To my list of faves.
Proxenos Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 4:21 AM
Birds are busy migrating, ours to warmer climates and your indigenous birds will stay put. Seasons change and like nomads, so do the birds - seasons must change - you are entering into the rebirth of Spring your butterflies will abound, as for our African bee I don't think swarms would be welcome as they are too aggressive (but are very productive) A masterful, imaginative write SO. Blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 4:02 PM
An inspiring poem. The birds are out singing. Have not seen any bees, birds and butterflies. Hope they will be out very soon. It is Springtime a time for newness.
Hawkens Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Wonderfully penned, and just beautiful. Happy Easter. I Hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Mchattie Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 12:22 PM
My father once told me to make something of myself. Your poem echos that sentiment. We should never stop growing. Wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day.
Gentile Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 2:19 PM
A beautiful and sensual plea this is, Silent One. May the birds, bees and butterflies return very soon!! Happy Wednesday
Gentile Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 2:19 PM
A beautiful and sensual plea this is, Silent One. May the birds, bees and butterflies return very soon!! Happy Wednesday
Salehi Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 8:12 PM
you soar with this exquisite write...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Flowing with such beauty!
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Beautiful my friend, with your lovely photo, I do like the photo :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 4:29 PM
lovely musings, Silent One. I enjoyed this one and your comment on my limerick.
Zola-Zaba Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 9:04 AM
There is always a spring ; a season to sprout and blossom back to life after a bleak cold winter, no matter how hard things get a season of being whole again is a promised and guaranteed one! Such a lovely well written piece u wrote here Silent One!
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:15 PM
When I wrote this, I was hoping people would see it differently and you have... Your reading of it makes sense as it can be portrayed as that... Thank you..
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 2:11 AM
I love this beautiful uplifting poem Silent. I am putting it into my Faves! We need this kind of inspiring poetry to give us hope during a very difficult time that spans the globe. Thank you for the cheer! xxoo
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Connie, lets hope the bees, birds and butterflies come back soon...
Theraven Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:52 PM
Silent One, Very well weaved, the colors flowed out of your pen to ignite the Spring Flora and Fauna. Yet there is someone missing from the opulent scene. We're no longer on the top of the food chain. -Richard
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:17 PM
If only it was so simple my friend.. to ignite nature, we need to take care of it... to ignite love, we need to take care of hearts... Thank yo..
May Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Bring butterflies back to the garden of life, Beautiful write Silent..
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:24 PM
There are many in my garden, that photo is from my garden.. Thank you
Nicole Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Breathe life into me.. it's like the whole world has just- stopped. Things will get back to normal, for all of us. We have to have patience and faith. The "Bees, birds and butterflies" still move about. They know- life goes on. Your thoughts caress gently around me. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Life can only go on with love... sometimes the love is not there... thank you..
Adams Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 1:51 PM
wow... the beginning sets this one up...diseased hearts need to be cared for just like diseased trees, or plants, and people... I see the world so differently now, more stars without the pollution of companies, more birds frolicking about... excellent write as always... hugs
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Yes and only love can cure the diseased heart... this poem, was actually written as a romantic one... but people have perceived it so differently.. which is great.. i did try to do that when i wrote it... Thank you..
Cunningham Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Thought provoking S. O., how often we seem to neglect our ' garden', in these dark times you realise how precious life is and we shouldnt take it for granted. Stay safe. Tom
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:30 PM
Yes and we are all gardeners in life.... Thank you Tom
Rose  Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 8:59 AM
I admire your pen and your strength of soul dear Silent One, another splendid beauty xo ps. may I use this poem please ?
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, feel free to use it..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 8:12 AM
"The heart is a neglected garden", the body is an infected Land.. Nature heals human nature and within its shade we disconnect the soul from hate, worries and turmoil.. to connect with divine beauty and relish in sublime serenity that allows not the soul "to linger in decay"! A great musing with the scent of purifying Nature! I liked so much your wonderful piece of Art, Silent One! Thank you so much for sharing. My deepest regards and blessings.
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, so glad you liked this one.. Nature is beautiful and it helps to grow love.. especially between two hearts...
Michael Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 7:32 AM
I'm buzzing my way back...searching for that flower...Well done...enjoyed the read
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Keep buzzing my friend.. keep buzzing.. thanks.
Pandit Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Excellent my friend: In what has become a monochrome existence, paint a masterpiece of magnolia meadows...I liked the soothing, urging tone of your poem for revitalization of neglected garden...great metaphoric write.
One Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Vijay, especially the revitalisation of love...
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