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Bees Are Coming

Bees are coming, bees are coming, how I love to hear their humming, tiny wings just drum, drum, drumming; we’ll be chumming, we’ll be chumming. We’ll share nectar freely with them, they’ll take a rest upon our stems, they’re such minute and buzzing gems; honey they give, honey they give. Tickling our petals with their wings, like a harpist playing the strings, they’re entertaining little things; those busy bees, those busy bees. And when they’ve drunk their nectar fill, they’ll search and find a place to spill, they’ll pollinate the daffodil’s; yes sir they will, yes sir they will. 3/16/2020 'STRAND CHOICE H,any form,any theme' Brian Strand

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Date: 3/2/2020 8:52:00 PM
This is a FAVE! I love the rhythm and flow, and esp. the onomatopoeia. Wonderful, M.L. Bravo, gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/2/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thanks again.
Date: 3/2/2020 7:45:00 AM
Lovely rhythm--enjoyed the happy tone and bouncy flow of your words.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/2/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/1/2020 11:48:00 AM
I've not seen any bees yet... Just rain and wind... Robin comes regularly though....loved your poem, great monorhyme...
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/1/2020 5:49:00 PM
Ah, but they are coming...just a couple of months away, around here. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/1/2020 8:34:00 AM
Great Monorhyme M.L. I enjoyed this :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/1/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I am glad.

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