Bees

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Inspired by hard working Bees.

Working hard, little worker bees
Working in harmony with their Queen
All organised and team effort 
Flying in the sky from sunrise to sunset 
Gathering nectar and pollen for the entire colony

While pollinating the flowers as they work
Their little antenna guides them to the best flowers
When the work is done...
Listening to the air waves to find your  way home
In the soft summer breeze

but...

While you huddle and shiver in winter 
Keeping Queen bee warm in a cluster
Rotating each other in turn 
Using the reserved honey sparingly 
To last all of the winter
Little worker bees

We all enjoy the honey you make
How important you are to the environment
If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be enjoying my honey treats




Date: 27/9/2016
For Bees Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/27/2016 3:08:00 PM
A great bees poem well-written x
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Date: 9/28/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Wendy x
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