Been There Done That

(Coming Back Home)

Crimson sunsets trickled beyond the moor
Opulence of one’s youth a mindset forever stays,
Miracle of homely birthplace the lure
Inspired by non-forgotten special days.
Neon lights above the door lost their glitter
Garish gowns grew tired torn and tatty,
Bothersome marriage a divorce turned bitter
Asylum that sends a sane person batty.
Calling out aloud in hope a childhood listens
Kindred spirit says let the passing of time begin,
Heart and mind to put behind all that glistens
Oh, and the carousel of show biz and the spin.
Memories are many so are the steps to climb
Epic journey the apex or slippery slope for a dime.

 © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Your acrostic is lovely and engrossing, Harry. I enjoyed reading it. :)
Peck Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:42 AM
A lovely poem that brought tears.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Love your line, "Epic journey the apex or slippery slope for a dime." Life is a journey. Have a blessed day/week....................
La France Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Harry, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Hi Harry, I'm just coming to give you a big congratulations on your win. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Glad you were able to enter Harry, this was just right for a win! Congrats, I enjoyed the read!
Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Harry - Coming back home - ' Memories are many so are the steps to climb, Epic journey the apex or slippery slope for a dime' Nice one Harry - i'm sorry you lost out, an excellent poem for the contest which would have placed high. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Wow, Harry! Much to see here! Love the opening line. Seems this life went downhill. And then there is talk of show biz! Must save this as a fave to read again! <3
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Great images--deeply emotive write, Harry.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Hello Harry Horseman, this poem would have won a contest. It sounds like a winner to me. enjoy your day my friend.
Ball Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Excellent Harry.Hope you made it in late or not. Alexis says it's still open. Good struff. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 10:29 AM
- Contest or not ... a winning poem for me anyway ... love it, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Fine work. It would have made a splendid entry for the contest.
Y. Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 9:10 AM
WoW! Harry, This is a good and well written entry for the contest.I found it to be poetic as well. I sense some apprehension about going home, but it’s a must, to do so. Well done. The contest is still open. Soup Mail:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 5:53 PM
You are most welcome:-)Alexis
Horsman Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 4:26 PM
So it is, Alexis. Last night before posting there were blank spaces in my contest list, and its fine now. Thanks ever so much.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Pity you missed the bus. It is a great poem. Still considered tops.
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Would have been a great entry for the contest Harry, sometimes places disappear quickly, ive been caught out a few times. Hope you're well Tom
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