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Bee Visitation

One Sunday in church came a bee. Up my pants leg he sat on my knee. I jumped from piano, Tore pants from my torso. Did striptease, where no one could see!

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Skat A

Date: 2/23/2010 6:11:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry tonight. Very intresting bee. I enjoyed the humor in the striptease..irma

Robyn Blauw

Date: 2/14/2010 2:07:00 AM

Lol,,, very funny, wish I had been a fly on the wall. Thanks for the comments on my poem. Hugsss

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/13/2010 10:17:00 PM

Chuckle! Ellen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 6:06:00 AM

hot poem!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/5/2010 8:37:00 AM

Ha,ha,ha! This is sooo funny, Marty. I'm glad I read this this a.m. Feeling a little blue. Not looking forward to this snow storm, which I am sure you're already experiencing! Stay warm, please. Take care. Peace, Audrey

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/4/2010 5:59:00 PM

That;s really funny, Marty! Would have loved to watch ..Was that part of the honey bees act? haha -Robert

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/2/2010 7:15:00 PM

Oh I hope no one saw. And that you didn't get stung. Great work. Love, Joyce

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/2/2010 4:02:00 AM

Forgive the pun Marty but this piece is the Bees Knees thanks Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2010 12:47:00 PM

well, thank goodness no one could see . teehee. this is cute! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2010 10:15:00 AM

I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Marty. I haven't been able to read much poetry for a few days now. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 9:52:00 AM

That bee had you jumping whether you were filled with the Holy Spirit or not. LOL one that you have written here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 8:03:00 AM

Funny... that bee distraction... hope it did not stop your piano playing too.. those times when u don't want to create a scene like in Church... that's when all hell breaks loose... luved this one.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/1/2010 6:43:00 AM

HhAahha,,you made me laugh out loud,funny indeed,and i have a feeling this is true:)Charma

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/1/2010 4:24:00 AM

All I see is Macauly Caulkin getting stung by an army of bees in "My Girl"..... Good visuals my friend......:JP]

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/31/2010 8:04:00 PM

Oh, I can just see this happening, Marty. Bet it's a true story! And if it didn't happen to you, surely it has happened to someone. We just have to learn to bee cool when they sit on our knee. Usually, if we remain still, they'll just buzz off. LOL Love, Carolyn