Bedtime Stories

Narrating breaths,
Tell the story of love.
Deep...inhales of desire,
Caress the long exhales of passion.

Warm flesh tales read,
Verbalized by each soft breath.
Paragraphs of Goosebumps,
Traced and translated by the tongue.

The taste of smooth ivory skin,
Satisfies...midnight cravings.
As her ardent veins, 
Throb with excitement...beckoning, 
The initiation of our nightly chapters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kopp Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Wonderfully written. It warms my skin just reading it!
Fraser Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 5:52 AM
Terrific Romanicism Raul, golly i need to find this book of Bedtime Stories >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 6:29 PM
sensual, nicely penned, great writing
Shango Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 6:22 AM
It has no start or end in the measure of its delight, the images are fresh and yet another great write.
Goombi Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Ha ha, those bedtime stories are a great read before bed. CG
Martin Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Love the way you approached this, nice and sensual.
Pickett Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 9:49 AM
Great poem today Raul... Haven't seen you in a while friend.... NICE work.....:JP]
Neal Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Nightly chapters, great work. DN
Neal Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:28 PM
Steamy write, got to love those stories.
Owens Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Woo Hoo...Raul you rascal,,,lol...what an exciting read...love it...Marty
La France Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 3:52 PM
So erotic and sexy... very .... nicely done...
Gorelick Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 3:04 PM
The soup has gotten vey sensual..i think its the weather. I love this piece..Midnight cravings...sigh. BG
Chircop Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Raul ,so very Romantic..Im going to sleep now cos its late here and i want to tell you,i enjoyed reading this Bedtime story,This Romantic poem whispers so soft,,beautiful,passionate and classic,,to my collection of favz it goes,,Goodnight-Charma
Culverhouse Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 2:41 PM
hot one!
Segal Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, good night I'm off to bed!!!! lol, love Simone
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