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Bedtime Stories

Narrating breaths, Tell the story of love. Deep...inhales of desire, Caress the long exhales of passion. Warm flesh tales read, Verbalized by each soft breath. Paragraphs of Goosebumps, Traced and translated by the tongue. The taste of smooth ivory skin, Satisfies...midnight cravings. As her ardent veins, Throb with excitement...beckoning, The initiation of our nightly chapters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/4/2010 9:13:00 AM
Wonderfully written. It warms my skin just reading it!
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:52:00 AM
Terrific Romanicism Raul, golly i need to find this book of Bedtime Stories >> James
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Date: 12/18/2009 6:29:00 PM
sensual, nicely penned, great writing
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:22:00 AM
It has no start or end in the measure of its delight, the images are fresh and yet another great write.
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:58:00 PM
Ha ha, those bedtime stories are a great read before bed. CG
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:05:00 PM
Love the way you approached this, nice and sensual.
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:49:00 AM
Great poem today Raul... Haven't seen you in a while friend.... NICE work.....:JP]
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:38:00 PM
Nightly chapters, great work. DN
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:28:00 PM
Steamy write, got to love those stories.
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:39:00 PM
Woo Hoo...Raul you rascal,,,lol...what an exciting read...love it...Marty
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:52:00 PM
So erotic and sexy... very .... nicely done...
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:04:00 PM
The soup has gotten vey sensual..i think its the weather. I love this piece..Midnight cravings...sigh. BG
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:42:00 PM
Raul ,so very Romantic..Im going to sleep now cos its late here and i want to tell you,i enjoyed reading this Bedtime story,This Romantic poem whispers so soft,,beautiful,passionate and classic,,to my collection of favz it goes,,Goodnight-Charma
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:41:00 PM
hot one!
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, good night I'm off to bed!!!! lol, love Simone
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