Lena Townsend Poet Quatrain

Bedroom Eyes

Filled with maturity 
Shining with laughter
Dancing in the starlight
Sparkling here after

Bold and daring
Like milk chocolate
Youthful and innocent
Extremely passionate

Soft and sexy
Thick lashes of black
Make up perfect
Totally relaxed

Uninhibited charm
Style shining through
Mystery and romance
Candle light hues

Gazing unto love
Maybe just desire
Eyes of the soul
Set hearts afire


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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James Fraser June 13, 2009 at 4:28 PM Beautiful poem Lena, delightfully written>>James

Brian Strand May 27, 2009 at 8:05 AM Congrats on your succes in Sami's contest Lolita Rgds Brian

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 26, 2009 at 7:46 PM Dear Lolita,Congratulations on YOUR very well deserved Honorable Mention in Sami's Contest I can see the "Bedroom Eyes" Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter May 26, 2009 at 2:16 PM So sorry I ever missed this! Simply exquisite! Warm congrats on your well deserved win! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards May 25, 2009 at 5:32 PM Great work, Lena...congratulations on this winning poem !!!!

L'Nass Shango April 23, 2009 at 8:14 AM Like a Greek sculptor you make words tell the emotions with such subtlety, and sing in the lyrical sweetness of cloudless passion. Another delectable feast.

Sebastian Aaron Baez April 22, 2009 at 8:20 AM HOT! indeed. My glasses are steaming up, lol. Great write. Extremely enjoyable.

Frank F. Atanacio April 22, 2009 at 6:32 AM clean--crisp and dare I say HOT? very good poem Lena :) Cheers

Christopher Higgins April 22, 2009 at 6:22 AM I love this poem...you wrote this so elegantly...your word choice made the piece flowed like a cool summer breeze bathing a heart searching for love.....well done.