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Bedroom Eyes

Filled with maturity Shining with laughter Dancing in the starlight Sparkling here after Bold and daring Like milk chocolate Youthful and innocent Extremely passionate Soft and sexy Thick lashes of black Make up perfect Totally relaxed Uninhibited charm Style shining through Mystery and romance Candle light hues Gazing unto love Maybe just desire Eyes of the soul Set hearts afire Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2009 4:28:00 PM

Beautiful poem Lena, delightfully written>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 5/27/2009 8:05:00 AM

Congrats on your succes in Sami's contest Lolita Rgds Brian

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/26/2009 7:46:00 PM

Dear Lolita,Congratulations on YOUR very well deserved Honorable Mention in Sami's Contest I can see the "Bedroom Eyes" Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/26/2009 2:16:00 PM

So sorry I ever missed this! Simply exquisite! Warm congrats on your well deserved win! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/25/2009 5:32:00 PM

Great work, Lena...congratulations on this winning poem !!!!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/23/2009 8:14:00 AM

Like a Greek sculptor you make words tell the emotions with such subtlety, and sing in the lyrical sweetness of cloudless passion. Another delectable feast.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 4/22/2009 8:20:00 AM

HOT! indeed. My glasses are steaming up, lol. Great write. Extremely enjoyable.

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/22/2009 6:32:00 AM

clean--crisp and dare I say HOT? very good poem Lena :) Cheers

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/22/2009 6:22:00 AM

I love this poem...you wrote this so elegantly...your word choice made the piece flowed like a cool summer breeze bathing a heart searching for love.....well done.