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Bed

A white ceiling, 
a dull life.
A wife?
No, just a knife -
that's all I need.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
its hilarious, but I like it. Good job.
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A.O. Taner
Date: 4/16/2016 5:20:00 AM
thanks.
Date: 3/31/2016 5:17:00 PM
A. O.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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