Bed

A white ceiling, a dull life. A wife? No, just a knife - that's all I need.

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Abiygayil Yisrael

Date: 4/15/2016 10:49:00 AM

its hilarious, but I like it. Good job.

A.O. Taner
Date: 4/16/2016 5:20:00 AM

thanks.

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Date: 3/31/2016 5:17:00 PM

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