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"BECOMING AND BEING" FROM MY ROOFTO GARDEN, 04 MAY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Becoming and Being

The roaring cosmological river of becoming forever flows into harmony's ocean of being! 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
        04 May 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/6/2018 9:28:00 PM
A very philosophical view of creation. Lovely!
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Date: 7/24/2017 7:48:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, Beautiful Monoku. Energy never dies it transforms :)
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Date: 6/30/2017 10:49:00 AM
Our building of our souls is always ongoing, thank you , Demetrios ~*
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Date: 6/3/2017 12:42:00 PM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, du hast das richtige fingerspitzengefuehl mit diesem Gedicht!! The metaphysical image created by the word picture of your Monoku makes one pause for some introspective thought. The photo of the flowers from your garden fits your write here perfectly!! A FAVE for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/24/2017 4:04:00 AM
Hi Demetrios, just like you, I am always gardening. Your monoku is a perfect fit . Both your flowers and monoku are beautiful.
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Date: 5/4/2017 3:38:00 PM
seven for the most gorgeous LIVING bouquet from the best rooftop in all Greece! Yes, and faved!
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Date: 5/4/2017 1:53:00 PM
Into my favorites into my life into living the fact Into my mind into the heart the road the poet the divinity the magical honesty of you lead me to...into Hhh thank you
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Date: 5/4/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much my dearest, Talin, for your enthusiasm for this little poem of mine! You honor me with your comment! God bless you!
Date: 5/4/2017 7:25:00 AM
An Amazing thought my dear Demetrios. Thanks for sharing A7++
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:27:00 AM
Happy you liked it my dear friend, Maria! Thank you and God bless you!
Date: 5/4/2017 6:14:00 AM
Such a cool and uplifting phrase and thought my friend. No need to climb a mountain, we have our poetic guru right here on soup.
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:18:00 AM
Sometimes I have to remember my academic background my friend! Thank you so much for your generous comment!
Date: 5/4/2017 4:41:00 AM
Too lofty an idea to my little grasp! ... but sounds melodious and great ...
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:19:00 AM
Humility exalts you my friend, Probir! Thank you so much for your visit!
Date: 5/4/2017 3:41:00 AM
So deep !!! Thoughtful. :)
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and comment dear, Shubham!
Date: 5/4/2017 2:54:00 AM
Wow...What a thought! Great imagery... Beautifully written... A big 7...
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you dearest, Supraja, for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 5/4/2017 2:46:00 AM
- An amazing poem, my friend :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:23:00 AM
You so kind my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for such a lovely comment! Hugs
Date: 5/4/2017 2:03:00 AM
I love the imagery and its meaning ~*
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:23:00 AM
Happy you do my friend, Eve! Thank you very much!
Date: 5/4/2017 1:47:00 AM
This is definitely a fav for me! So in tune! Excellent 7+
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:24:00 AM
You too generous my friend, WW! Happy you liked it! Thank you!
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