Becoming and Being

The roaring cosmological river of becoming forever flows into harmony's ocean of being! 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
        04 May 2017

lifeuniversemonoku

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Carole Duet

February 6, 2018 at 9:28 PM

A very philosophical view of creation. Lovely!

Susan Ashley

July 24, 2017 at 7:48 PM

Hi Demetrios, Beautiful Monoku. Energy never dies it transforms :)

Eve Roper

June 30, 2017 at 10:49 AM

Our building of our souls is always ongoing, thank you , Demetrios ~*

Gary Bateman

June 3, 2017 at 12:42 PM

Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, du hast das richtige fingerspitzengefuehl mit diesem Gedicht!! The metaphysical image created by the word picture of your Monoku makes one pause for some introspective thought. The photo of the flowers from your garden fits your write here perfectly!! A FAVE for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jannie Breedt

May 24, 2017 at 4:04 AM

Hi Demetrios, just like you, I am always gardening. Your monoku is a perfect fit . Both your flowers and monoku are beautiful.

Anil Deo

May 4, 2017 at 3:38 PM

seven for the most gorgeous LIVING bouquet from the best rooftop in all Greece! Yes, and faved!

Talin Kalishian

May 4, 2017 at 1:53 PM

Into my favorites into my life into living the fact Into my mind into the heart the road the poet the divinity the magical honesty of you lead me to...into Hhh thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 4, 2017 at 3:01 PM

Thank you so much my dearest, Talin, for your enthusiasm for this little poem of mine! You honor me with your comment! God bless you!