Becoming and Being

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"BECOMING AND BEING" FROM MY ROOFTO GARDEN, 04 MAY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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The roaring cosmological river of becoming forever flows into harmony's ocean of being! © Demetrios Trifiatis 04 May 2017

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Carole Duet

Date: 2/6/2018 9:28:00 PM

A very philosophical view of creation. Lovely!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2017 7:48:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, Beautiful Monoku. Energy never dies it transforms :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/30/2017 10:49:00 AM

Our building of our souls is always ongoing, thank you , Demetrios ~*

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/3/2017 12:42:00 PM

Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, du hast das richtige fingerspitzengefuehl mit diesem Gedicht!! The metaphysical image created by the word picture of your Monoku makes one pause for some introspective thought. The photo of the flowers from your garden fits your write here perfectly!! A FAVE for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jannie Breedt

Date: 5/24/2017 4:04:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, just like you, I am always gardening. Your monoku is a perfect fit . Both your flowers and monoku are beautiful.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/4/2017 3:38:00 PM

seven for the most gorgeous LIVING bouquet from the best rooftop in all Greece! Yes, and faved!

Talin Kalishian

Date: 5/4/2017 1:53:00 PM

Into my favorites into my life into living the fact Into my mind into the heart the road the poet the divinity the magical honesty of you lead me to...into Hhh thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/4/2017 3:01:00 PM