Beckoning Her

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She reached for the ribbons of her gown
not knowing why, but she held them in her hand
as she floated through the ever changing mist,
whites and grays in a swirling pattern,
mesmerizing in blends and shifts, 
blurred yet possessing a clarity she could not explain
or cared to think about right now

She looked down on herself in her bed sobbing, 
clutching tightly a dampened pillow, lonely, a photo 
in a silver frame on the bedside table, missing...
now very confused as a peaceful awareness wrapped about her warmly,
caressing her spirit, washing away the pain, 
the sadness, the torment which she fought now to remember
as it drifted below, creating new shadows about her feet
but distant, never forgotten, she couldn’t, it was promised…

Once more the satin ribbons were pulled gently, guided
as if a feather laced kite on a silver string embracing blue skies,
dancing about in the slow rhythm, spun in clouded dreams,
breathless she soars higher, it seems towards the sun
or perhaps a light of a different source, it felt soft, cool
beckoning her and she yearned for it…
for some reason it felt right

Stars swept past her in wiry glistening designs
like a sparkler at a summer cookout waved through the air 
in abstract cherry-lime glowings and apple pie tickles and she smiled, 
for the first time in a long time as the moon disappeared on the horizon,
embracing this new experience she continued allowing the tender tugs on her ribbons
to move her freely, when she felt something, it was a hand on hers,
helping her hold the ribbons, it felt familiar, safe, comforting

When she saw his eyes, as clear as she had ever seen anything,
deep and friendly, soothing just as she had remembered…remembered?
He took her by the hands and he came even more into focus
“Hi there, I have missed you,” he sighed and she knew it was him
He was here, wherever here was, he held her in his arms now as he said, 
“I promised you I would love you eternally, I have been waiting for you” 
She cried again, happy tears as she whispered. “You did, you did, is this…” 

“Shhh,” he placed a caring finger to her lips…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 14, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Hi Chris, You penned a well written heartfelt story. I was drawn to every word. It's a beautiful love story. The bond between the two characters is so strong and beautiful. It's a well crafted piece of "enternal" love. I enjoyed the end but I feel like there's more to the bond story. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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October 14, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Thank you Alexis, that is such a nice thing to say. There could be more to this bond but it is pretty tight as it is. Though I do know that love knows no boundaries. I appreciate your kindness always and look forward to your visits to my poetry.
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October 14, 2016 at 3:19 PM
A beautiful rendering of eternal love.
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October 14, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Thank so very much Tim. I am glad you liked it.
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October 14, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Holy, I have goosebumps and are you deliberately trying to make my mascara run?? Utterly heartbreaking and lovely in the same breath. I adore your stories, epic indeed, and the imagery is off the charts Chris!
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October 14, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Paloma, your wonderful comments are like daily gifts for me to open and always they bring a huge smile to my face.
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October 14, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Very very sweet Chris...Oh Im favouring all yr poems..so it seems..but I really like it. a fave.
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October 14, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Charmaine, you are such an angel, I am so happy my poetry touches you in this fashion. Thanks you so very much for everything.
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October 14, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Wow! Unbelievable poem! I have you in my favorites. Thank you.
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October 14, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks you Heidi for your always wonderful and encouraging comments on my poetry. I am more than thrilled you liked this one. I am a big fan of yours as well. Can't wait to read more.
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