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Beckoned Toward Hope's Beam

Beholding bountiful compassion-blessings of God* beyond bankruptcy… Brothers and sisters, let’s be braced-up, becoming better bouncing against bitterness borne by crises’ bondage breaking free from backsliding midst burdens built-up now: healed heart, soul and body bowing to the Saviour Lord, blissful beckoned toward hope’s beam. Bestowed with bread and butter from the Creator’s barns … Beloved, let’s share, battling against selfishness’ bouts Blowing away boastfulness in stewardship business beautified along faith-blooms of love’s benefits buttressed upon biblical belief besieged by divine boldness bringing service best.
*2Samuel 22:47 The LORD liveth; and blessed be my rock; and exalted be the God of the rock of my salvation. December 19, 2020 1st place, "Alliteration" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 12/22/2020.

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Date: 12/25/2020 3:06:00 PM
Great that you have included your faith based work in the contest which is an awesome winner. Sara
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Date: 12/23/2020 9:11:00 AM
I think it most appropriate that a poet named Beata use bwords to win this contest. Congratulations on your top placement. Not easily done. Enjoy and bathe in the moment.
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Date: 12/23/2020 4:56:00 AM
"beautified along faith-blooms of love’s benefits", Beautiful write Beata, Wishing you a safe and blessed Christmas, God bless you
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Date: 12/23/2020 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata, for your Top Win for this beautiful graceful poem!!!
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Date: 12/23/2020 1:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 12/22/2020 10:02:00 PM
A wonderful piece. Congrats on your top placement.;0)
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Date: 12/22/2020 8:16:00 PM
Well done and love how the poem forms what reminds me of angels wings! Congratulations! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/22/2020 7:47:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/19/2020 5:32:00 AM
L O V E L Y! God bless you dear lady. I hope you're a winner
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