Beckoned Toward Hope's Beam

Beholding bountiful compassion-blessings of God* beyond bankruptcy… Brothers and sisters, let’s be braced-up, becoming better bouncing against bitterness borne by crises’ bondage breaking free from backsliding midst burdens built-up now: healed heart, soul and body bowing to the Saviour Lord, blissful beckoned toward hope’s beam. Bestowed with bread and butter from the Creator’s barns … Beloved, let’s share, battling against selfishness’ bouts Blowing away boastfulness in stewardship business beautified along faith-blooms of love’s benefits buttressed upon biblical belief besieged by divine boldness bringing service best.
*2Samuel 22:47 The LORD liveth; and blessed be my rock; and exalted be the God of the rock of my salvation. December 19, 2020 1st place, "Alliteration" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 12/22/2020.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Great that you have included your faith based work in the contest which is an awesome winner. Sara
Gaul Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 9:11 AM
I think it most appropriate that a poet named Beata use bwords to win this contest. Congratulations on your top placement. Not easily done. Enjoy and bathe in the moment.
May Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 4:56 AM
"beautified along faith-blooms of love’s benefits", Beautiful write Beata, Wishing you a safe and blessed Christmas, God bless you
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations, Beata, for your Top Win for this beautiful graceful poem!!!
Chamberlain Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 1:38 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 10:02 PM
A wonderful piece. Congrats on your top placement.;0)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 8:16 PM
Well done and love how the poem forms what reminds me of angels wings! Congratulations! Merry Christmas!
Roper Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
Mcintosh Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 5:32 AM
L O V E L Y! God bless you dear lady. I hope you're a winner
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