Becca's Poem

Written for my friend Becca

A gold colored mist floats gently by
 The brightness of pearls fill my eyes
A delightful breeze caresses my ears

Is this real or is this a dream?

 The feel of a sunset as I get pulled near
 Two shimmering stars look my way
Movement so fluid like a cool mountain stream
She's a masterpiece in motion

A  transparent wall affords us this view 
 of what sparkles inside like the most
Precious jewels 

 Is this something too wonderful to believe?
 Perhaps, but still here she is right
In front of me
A masterpiece in motion

 As the gold colored mist floats gently by
Like the midday sun it warms me inside

The delightful breeze that caresses my ears 
Fills my heart with joy every time I hear it

Is a masterpiece in motion so hard to believe
I think not because she's right here in front of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/18/2017 8:09:00 AM
Very beautiful write for your friend Edward :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 6/18/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for your kind comment.
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