Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Because I Live

“Not enjoyment, and not sorrow;
  Is our destined end or way;
  But to act, that each to-morrow
  Find us farther than today.”
A Psalm of Life, by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Because I live, I am me, avid voice among the free,
Flexing freedom, defining contours of my dreams,
Ambling life’s prairies, rowing life’s eager streams,
Braving challenges, eying serene, hosting sublime,
Purposefully furthering life, with every tick of time.

Curious, conscious of the mortal world, I am aware,
Amplifying empathy, nurturing amiability, I care;
Not prone to seek hurdles, when faced I will dare
Maneuvering around the detours on life’s highway
So tomorrow would shine, upon my brumous day.

Witnessing travails faced, wishing for a fairer way,
Vying hope of rising dawn, exiting night of dismay,
Resembling urge of spring rooting in wintry decay,
Aspiring to a kinder world, short of goal, yet I wait,
To pluck fruits of morrow, negotiating course of fate.

April 12, 2023
Because I Live Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Evelyn Judy Buehler August 5, 2023 at 10:50 AM Wonderful words of beauty and wisdom, with expressions that thrill and delight. An amazing poem, Vijay.

Suzanne Delaney April 22, 2023 at 3:45 AM So much to relate to in your beautiful poem, Vijay: Your words are so uplifting and thoughtfully expressed. A FAV to me. SuZ

Joe Maverick April 16, 2023 at 11:03 AM Such good content you have put out Here Vijay More power to your perception and talebt I venture great to read.'

Janice Canerdy April 16, 2023 at 5:59 AM Vijay, your vividly descriptive, expressive poem contains great wisdom, some of which really resonates with me. Janice

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2023 at 10:14 AM Hope you got a win. Very well done, Vijay

Demetrios Trifiatis April 15, 2023 at 10:01 AM Obviously you have written a profound poem filled with knowledge and wisdom, my friend, Vijay. Admirably done. Be blessed.

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2023 at 2:52 AM I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me way to go. It is very detailed and expressive. Sara

Bill Baker April 14, 2023 at 2:10 PM Exquisite, imagery and descriptions, Vijay. An excellent entry for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Have a great week! Bill

Mike Gentile April 14, 2023 at 5:44 AM Vijay, what a great take on the theme! I love the last line especially !! With terrific composition, you conveyed your outlook on life in a poetically beautiful way!! Happy Friday!! Vijay Pandit April 14, 2023 at 6:51 AM Glad you liked the poem, Mike. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole April 13, 2023 at 5:38 PM "Because I live, I am me, avid voice among the free." Such a beautiful thought, which holds so much truth. (Powerful indeed, if you think about it) Voices all over the world. Your thoughts are emotional, yet inspiring and uplifting, all at the same time. You've created another Masterpiece, Vijay. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit April 14, 2023 at 6:50 AM Thank you friend for your kind remarks. Always a pleasure to read your comments. Many thanks, Brandy.

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2023 at 11:13 AM A wonderful write. Love It. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away.............. Vijay Pandit April 14, 2023 at 6:49 AM Much appreciate, Paula--many thanks.

Joseph May April 13, 2023 at 8:39 AM Well penned Vijay, best wishes Vijay Pandit April 14, 2023 at 6:48 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Valsa George April 13, 2023 at 2:47 AM So lovely and meaningful. Enjoyed reading about your aspirations on life and your evaluation of the world. Profound and equally thought provoking . All the Best, dear Vijay. Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:06 AM So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks, Valsa.

Daniel Turner April 12, 2023 at 7:43 PM Powerful penning, Vijay. Always best to look at the bright side. Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:06 AM Thank you Daniel--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands April 12, 2023 at 3:31 PM Oh wow, this is another Fave for me because I can really identify with what you wrote and it is also very inspiring and true. I love this Vijay. Thanks for sharing :) Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:05 AM Glad you can relate to the theme my friend. Much appreciate your supportive feedback and your FAVE. Many heartfelt thanks, Heidi.

Sotto Poet April 12, 2023 at 12:56 PM Vijay, you have every reason to be delighted with your poetry since you have created a really inspiring poem. Your depictions of life's path, with its limits, failures, and unexpected twists, as well as your endeavors to harvest the countless yields of the future, are truly magical. We should make the most of our time here on Earth and savor every beautiful moment. Good Luck Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:04 AM Your thoughts are uplifting my friend. Much appreciate your detailed insights, as always, Lasaad. Many thanks.

Fin Chuuk April 12, 2023 at 9:52 AM This is just so amazingly inspiring. I love it all. And another fave… I also live in the moment and hope for tomorrow ~ Fin Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:03 AM I like your outlook on life my friend--live in the moment and hope of tomorrow. Much appreciate your kind feedback and your FAVE, fin. Heartfelt thanks for both.

Speaks Volumes April 12, 2023 at 8:33 AM This is inspiring my friend. to seek a path of improvement for each tomorrow. Such a profound way to live. Your words as you describe the journey of life with its challenges, hurdles and detours, and to pluck the bountiful fruits of tomorrow, are shire magic. A beautiful poem Vijay, you must be proud. Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:01 AM So very kind of you Wendy! Much appreciate your kind thoughts and analysis, my friend. Many thanks.

Joseph P. DiMino April 12, 2023 at 7:22 AM Amazing how many takes on this wonderful theme by Vie: and each one so appropriate and perfect. Great read...I would be unable to decide a winner -- so many glorious entries! Another FAV! "Because I live, I am me, avid voice among the free, Flexing freedom, defining contours of my dreams, Ambling life’s prairies, rowing life’s eager streams, Braving challenges, eying serene, hosting sublime, Purposefully furthering life, with every tick of time." Splendid write! Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 8:00 AM So nice to hear that from you my friend. Your insights are always valued. Much appreciate how you take the time to write detailed comments. Many thanks, Joe. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Tom Cunningham April 12, 2023 at 7:21 AM A very inspiring verse Vijay, living life to the full is what we must do because every second is precious. Best of luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 7:57 AM So true--every second is precious. Much appreciate your insights, Tom. Many thanks, as always.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2023 at 6:20 AM - Love the whole poem... especially the end - Best wishes in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 7:57 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise. Always appreciate your visit and kind feedback.