Because-

With mental arms, I gather up the reasons
Why I love you .....

Our season came in springtime
You did not intend to be my knight
No white steed, nor heroic plan
Just a man....

But like a tree, standing tall
When seasons came, to swallow whole
You wrapped strong limbs around me
And kept me safe
A shelter strong and deeply rooted
Of which the leaves are songs,
A lyric quiet and soft and gentle
With cradled moments to let me lean
Then, with tender breeze
That pushed me into the sun...

Painfully young, and damp behind our ears...
And at the edge of jagged worlds unknown
We took the dare and leaped, without a glance...
With little chance...that we would survive the fall...
But like young birds, we soared, ...you made me sure
Your wings were spread, you led me in the glide...
With dependability, faithfulness, security, kindness...

And as a man.....not a complicated man,
Perhaps, rather ordinary,  from another's point of view...
The view from here, ....so high, we flew...
Has always been quite grand....

With capable, weathered, calloused, caressing hands...
You caressed our lives, ....my own, and those of our children..
Keeping us safe....for all these years...
And taking us on a glorious ride, on wings that fly...above the highest trees...
                                                                 To a land, where love knows no end...




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Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Awesome. Nice going. luv Ralph
Quigley Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Nicely penned Carrie. Sounds like he is a lucky man. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 11:06 PM
CARRIE., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 8:18 PM
congrats Carrie on an exciting win for this beautiful poetry entry ...
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Carrie
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Carrie
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:04 PM
"To a land, where love knows no end" Love this line Carrie, Congratulations on a superb Job on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Ramsdale Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
Williams Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:46 AM
hey Carrie congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 2:32 AM
Congrats Carrie on your excellent win with this extraordinaire' write so creative on flying luv..
Mckenzie Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:20 PM
AH Carrie so beautiful Congratulations my friend God when you speak I listen and feel you! WOW is all I can say! Laura :)
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September 4, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Such a stunning poem from one of my favorite writers. So happy to see you placing high in Deb's contest. Congratulations, Carrie! Of the entries I've read, this is truly a standout. Love, Carolyn
Villanueva Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 4:53 PM
CONGRATULATIONS my friend for this 4th placement in the contest~~smile~~~
K. Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 10:46 PM
You got me dazzled, Carrie (had to use it!! & it holds so true for this beauty!)-- this is so heartfelt-- you are so blessed to have such an amazing man in your life, a beautiful love you really deserve-- you speak from the heart with this & it totally shows-- congrats on your win & thank so much for all your inspiring words in mine :D hugs to you! :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:26 PM
arghhhhhhhh ditto Congrad's on your exempliary poetic verse winning! Light & Love
Neels Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:18 PM
A stunning write Carrie, congratulations on your win, love Wilma
Mehta Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Carrie
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Carrie. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 4:49 AM
ABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL! Touched me deeply. We should all be so fortunate. Beauiful tribute to an extraordinary man, Carrie. Many congrats. Love, Lainie
Mannan Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 9:22 PM
h Carrie this so tenderly touched my heart. Loved it. Many congrats.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list is now posted to view .. all fixed..
Dillard Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 5:13 PM
You really write some beautiful pieces...You should know I'm crying...
Thaker Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 7:53 PM
beautiful
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