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Bebop

man like it was cool like an ice box left open in the heat as the jazz oozed out in statico beats of non-conformity to the jive laid down by the suits that live in black an white laced straight world without soul or knowing of the flamboyant dreams billowed by the wind of night.

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Date: 12/28/2014 5:01:00 PM
Okay..Interesting..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2014 5:02:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 12/27/2014 10:17:00 AM
you are very welcome Richard.. PD
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:11:00 AM
Richard, i like the tone in this poem, to live in black in white. That seems to be my favorite thought throughout the poem... Now this is a very xool free verse poem. I like this style, but for some reason, I am not good at the short form... Awesomely refreshing... LINDA
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Richard Poor
Date: 12/27/2014 10:16:00 AM
again,thank you with my heart Richard ps..minalisim...

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