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Beauty Of Universe Unwraps Soul

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March 26, 2025

"Eight Beautiful Lines" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

Poetry unravels and unwraps my soul in a way My senses are wildly awake to absorb the sights and mellifluous sounds of the world reigning my spirit, My heart opens to the sublime vermillion sky, To the melody of sapphire waves lapping on the shore, To the magical harmony of acoustic bird-songs! My senses are entranced with the chimes of temple-bells, I am spell-bound, beauty of the Universe becomes mine!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/3/2025 6:09:00 AM

I really like this one Mala. You capture such beauty with your words! Congratulations! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/3/2025 6:56:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, your kind words inspire me. Looking forward to read yours.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/2/2025 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love your beautiful write. Have a blessed day with your win................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/2/2025 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Your beautiful words inspire me.

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2025 9:55:00 AM

Mala, a "beautiful poem, congratulations. I sent you a soupmail today, blessings ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/2/2025 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, Constance, for the placement.

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2025 3:07:00 AM

A beautiful poem indeed, congratulations

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/31/2025 6:10:00 PM

Dear Terry, Thank you so much! Your beautiful comments uplift my soul. Really appreciate!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/31/2025 12:27:00 AM

beauty of the universe! lovely write dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/31/2025 6:08:00 PM

Dear Thriveni, Thank you so much for your inspiring comment - it lifts my spirit!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2025 7:41:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Mala :) - The variety in nature and the universe is absolutely amazing ... it is to be completely enchanted by :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/27/2025 3:04:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I really appreciate your inspiring words. You know I was travelling for a while, and didn’t have enough time to work on the poems. I will start reading and writing again. Warm wishes ~