Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

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March 26, 2025

"Eight Beautiful Lines" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

Beauty Of Universe Unwraps Soul

Poetry unravels and unwraps my soul in a way
My senses are wildly awake to absorb the sights
and mellifluous sounds of the world reigning my spirit, 
My heart opens to the sublime vermillion sky,
To the melody of sapphire waves lapping on the shore,
To the magical harmony of acoustic bird-songs!
My senses are entranced with the chimes of temple-bells,
I am spell-bound, beauty of the Universe becomes mine!

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Linda Alice Fowler April 3, 2025 at 6:09 AM I really like this one Mala. You capture such beauty with your words! Congratulations! :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 3, 2025 at 6:56 AM Thank you, Linda, your kind words inspire me. Looking forward to read yours.

Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2025 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win. I love your beautiful write. Have a blessed day with your win................ Malabika Ray Choudhury April 2, 2025 at 4:05 PM Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Your beautiful words inspire me.

Constance La France April 2, 2025 at 9:55 AM Mala, a "beautiful poem, congratulations. I sent you a soupmail today, blessings ~ Malabika Ray Choudhury April 2, 2025 at 4:04 PM Thank you, Constance, for the placement.

Terry Miller March 31, 2025 at 3:07 AM A beautiful poem indeed, congratulations Malabika Ray Choudhury March 31, 2025 at 6:10 PM Dear Terry, Thank you so much! Your beautiful comments uplift my soul. Really appreciate!

thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:27 AM beauty of the universe! lovely write dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Malabika Ray Choudhury March 31, 2025 at 6:08 PM Dear Thriveni, Thank you so much for your inspiring comment - it lifts my spirit!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2025 at 7:41 AM - Beautifully written, Mala :) - The variety in nature and the universe is absolutely amazing ... it is to be completely enchanted by :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury March 27, 2025 at 3:04 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I really appreciate your inspiring words. You know I was travelling for a while, and didn’t have enough time to work on the poems. I will start reading and writing again. Warm wishes ~