Beauty of Love Split Haiku

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true love sees beauty
     in a flowers willing bloom
     quite
     blind to its thorned stem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/6/2016 9:47:00 PM
Charlie, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2016 10:43:00 PM
So glad you passed my way, thanks Linda, I appreciate your note...
Date: 4/6/2016 3:10:00 PM
WOW Charlie....this is simpleeee beautiful. Congratulations.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/6/2016 5:12:00 PM
I'm winkin' atcha
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Lin, I had a good teacher...
Date: 4/6/2016 7:52:00 AM
Oh so true, and how beautifully, concisely penned. Congratulations!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2016 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Dineen...
Date: 4/6/2016 2:06:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Charlie..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/6/2016 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma...
Date: 4/5/2016 5:11:00 PM
beautiful haiku Charlie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 4/5/2016 5:05:00 PM
So much said in those few words, Charlie. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Sandra
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 4/5/2016 4:54:00 PM
Charlie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/5/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Luloo...
Date: 3/31/2016 10:45:00 AM
This is a lovely split haiku, Charlie; people in love are often oblivious of any pain that it could bring along with it. // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/31/2016 10:51:00 AM
True, and thanks for your gracious note...
Date: 3/28/2016 1:46:00 PM
Yes with have to look past all that might hurt us into the beauty. Excellent my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/28/2016 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Tim
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