Beauty of a Sunset

Sitting on top of the mountain
I was exclaiming  at the beauty
of a sunset I wouldn't want a life 
without nature in it.

Now as I age I face far greater 
limitations,
I felt so many varieties 
of emptiness lately.
 I need to block the 
meaningful communication, 
and be willing to become 
transformed to ignore 
what my ego is saying, 
and listen to my soul.

I have but one dream
that's my family, 
one heart that's me in them
 with them no matter
 wherever they are,
 near or far we will reach
 that star, we will spend 
much time as a family,
it never happened .

My life is sad although 
I did nothing that bad 
to deserve to live, 
as lonesome as it can get.
I yearn to live a life 
where all is bright 
and everything is alright
before losing my insight. 

That is why unfortunately 
my choices and options 
became more limited.
Living in the past
I had to learn how to live 
my life with those restrictions,
imposed on me due to our 
financial circumstances,
because of the sixteen years
of war in our country.

My heart is homeless
escaped to lay on a pavement, 
beg a passer by offer a tissue 
to wipe away the unspoken,
 that was hiding in me
 for years.
 
Oh! twister, whirl me strongly 
towards spring showers,
wet my brain with a drop
of water to surface intact,
accept that my loneliness 
is doomed. 
     Alone I am. 

Therese Bacha
14 September
     2014       Contest for PD. A poem never put in a contest before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ituma Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:14 PM
I love your poetry I wish you will read mine and rate it for me
Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Congrats on the high win and wish you happy new year, Therese
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Hello DR. Ram, Happy New Year, thank you so much for passing by to review my poem. Coming from you it is an honor. Regards. Terry xo
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Such an emotional piece- many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Hi Jan, Happy New Year, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. Regards Terry xoxo
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 8:09 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful winning poem, Terry - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Happy New Year, To you Ann, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. You were always a faithful friend. Regards Terry xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 1:09 AM
glad to see you won big with this one and have a happy new year, dear terry.
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Hi Andrea, Happy New Year to you to, and God bless your family. Thank you for passing by Andrea, I know I have not written to you lately, but my son had a small incident concerning his health, so till I got the results positive, I was unable to share. I will be busy starting Monday, to go back to his restaurant everyday to help him out. I promise to drop by. Love Terry xoxo
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December 31, 2014 at 9:04 PM
Congrats on your fine win and happy new year Therese...huggs
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Happy New Year, so nice of you to pass by to review my poem, and leave such a beautiful review. Regards Terry xoxo
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December 31, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Hello Therese,, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Hello PD, I am so so happy you are back, and on top, giving me such an honor to be on your list as number one, it touched me so deeply. You always judged my poems with lots of care, and you make me so proud of myself. Happy New Year PD, and may God grant you all your wishes. Love Terry xoxoxo I will drop by to read your poem. xooxoxxo
Jones Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 12:29 PM
My dearest T...this is exactly what I was talking about before...the title says it all....sometimes the beauty of the sunset is the thing that gets us through a day..thank you for sharing this
Bacha Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Hi D. At last you appeared, I send yo many mail to see how you are, you got me worried as u never answered me back. Just to know are you OK D. I feel not. I am here for u. Love Terry xoox
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October 14, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Hello Therese, Second message from me. You are doing very fine with everything. Keep writing and working at everything. Don't ever let anyone tell you different about your abilities. All of us are similar and yet different level. And you should know that on reading some of the supposed "great published poets," many of them are really no better than many of us are. They're lucky, however, because they got some things published and are in the main stream. We all can do that to!! Cheers, Gary
Bacha Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:29 AM
You are such a caring person Gary, to take some time to write another sharing review, lifting my moral. I liked the way you offered me to feel great. Take care, we will see each other soon. Terry xo By the way, I wrote a new poem about my past. If you want to read it. I felt good writing it down. Thanks xoxoxo
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October 13, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Hello Therese, A most heartfelt and compelling free verse composition. The emotion, passion and pain are quite obvious, but you articulate them and express their meaning so well here in your work. I enjoyed your write here immensely!! Very Powerful Indeed!! My Best Wishes and Cheers, Gary
Bacha Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Hello Gary, your review touched my heart, you send me a message that i can write poetry, and this made me so happy. I never felt I had enough potentials to write poetry. Bless you Hugs Terry xoxoxo
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October 11, 2014 at 1:23 AM
This is a very heartfelt write my dear friend Therese. I was so delighted to read this well-done poem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing your life and this gem. Hope everything is doin well with you. Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by on my page. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
Bacha Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Hello Leonora, I have been away for quite a while, but I am planing to get back here on Poetry. I have missed you all. Thank you my friend for passing by to review this poem. It means a lot to me. Hugs Terry xoxo
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October 7, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..Sometimes our hearts ache with pain but those around don't have a clue..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the get well wishes on my blog..I went to the surgeon today and he dismissed me..He says I am fine just change my diet to low fat..Sara
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October 7, 2014 at 2:09 PM
I am so happy to read that Sara, God loves you and your family. Try as much as you can, not to eat heavy food. You can do it I am sure. Thank God for keeping you safe. Bless you Sara, write to me anytime you feel like it. Hugs Terry xoxo
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October 4, 2014 at 10:59 PM
terry, I was thinking of you after seeing your sweet words to Lucilla and so I was surprised to come here and see you had posted a poem just last month. I really like this and I know how painful your past life was. And how much you adore your sons. I hope you are not alone and that you are still with your friend or your sons. Soupmail.
Bacha Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:16 PM
Hi Andrea, I am so so sad about Lucy, i knew although she was not OK, but it tore my heart away. Thank you Andrea for reading my poem, and as usual you leave me a heartfelt review. I do appreciate that so much. I hope you are doing great. See u Terry xoxo
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September 30, 2014 at 5:38 PM
To be alone in a bloody crowd, feeling of loss it is my shroud, but act another part and then, change your mood, be young again, and bloody laugh out loud, mood swings are allowed , im having one of them (me) who am i today and when??? Don re Therese Bacha 'Beauty Of A Sunset'
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 11:39 PM
what a powerful piece terry of writing dear friend i tip my hat smiling
Curtis Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:53 PM
This Is a very emotional piece done well, from the heart, the best part is, when you write "I have but one dream" because Therese, that's all any life needs.
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Very deep and captivating write on the beauty of a sunset, therese
Chircop Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 3:32 AM
Ow sweet lady.How are you?How have you been?So happy to see you.Search deeper,dont be scared of your silence ,but listen to it.Jesus loves you.He gives you life for a purpose,you could be the mentor of manyhere at soup.You have survived the abyss of war,you will survive it all(the loneliness) I mean..A big big hug..Charma
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