Beauty In Transition

When autumn’s breezes in celebration, send colored parchments swirling, curling down; my heart sings in humbled adoration, as nature’s palette, dons new dressing gown. As chill winds visit I crave my slumber; all animals in deep hibernation, have stored food to quell chilled winter’s hunger; each one harbor’s his own needed ration. Colored puzzle pieces, they dot the land, to warm Gaia’s, soon hibernating breast. Part of a higher, elaborate plan, like humans, Earth needs, her deep, winter rest. Soon icy stars will be filtering down from periwinkle skies where snow clouds are hung.
11-13-19 Favourite Poem from November 2019 Poetry Contest Julia Ward

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Date: 11/17/2019 9:43:00 AM
An amazing write MLK - your phrases, words and talented writes reveal a refined, well learned poet. I think the line 'Each one harbor's his own needed ration' - indicates not only your humbled adoration, I feel the animals also show their humbleness by not over storing so that there is enough for everyone! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer; I do appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 11/15/2019 1:35:00 PM
Your metaphoric write has my heart smiling. "as nature’s palette, dons new dressing gown."
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2019 12:47:00 PM
Aw, good; I'm glad and thanks.
Date: 11/14/2019 1:19:00 PM
This is beautiful. I love the line...colored puzzle pieces, they dot the land. Very nice :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/14/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 11/14/2019 9:16:00 AM
Should be a POTD. Best wines, ML Panagiota
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/14/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 11/13/2019 2:40:00 PM
You've captured the mood and colour of Autumn beautifully. Best wishes for the contest.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thank you so much.
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