Beauty In My Broken Places

It is as ardent as a ruby
And nonpareil as a gold, 
Decked with keloids like pearls
It is a pure treasure trove, 
Of bloodstained esteem to behold.
It is as byzantine as an art, 
Spilling notions of forgotten seasons, 
Frescoing the final caged tumultuous echoes, 
That had once ripped and rushed
From this heart within.

What is it? 

It is nothing but the pains and pleasures
Of that blood clotted scar
On the pinkened flesh of mine
Tasting peace and making me remind
Of those historic embalmment
Of my conquests and of vanquished released.
I am just drifted through
And addicted by the beauty
In my broken places
Across, beyond and beneath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 4:22 AM
I agree with the comment below - A very good poem! I have to say, Nayanika, after reading through several of your excellent poems today, that, in general, they tend to concentrate on certain themes. As you live in such an amazing country, with its magnificent scenery steeped in mysticism and legend, I myself think, by widening your scope and including more of what is all about you, you could produce some really fantastic verse. Food for thought maybe? My very warmest regards, Nayanika. :) john
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July 15, 2017 at 4:56 PM
brilliant poem..
Dey Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Tons of thanks to you for such words of appraisal!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Nayanika, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.Some people see beauty in a different way.
Dey Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 6:25 AM
Thank you!
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