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Beauty In Motion

His smile awaiting His bright eyes like deep, dark pools Skin so unblemished His walk---so swift and so smooth Intense skipping of my heart

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Date: 10/1/2010 6:13:00 AM

The heart must skip if we will play ... the game as beautiful as our poetry. One love

Date: 9/13/2010 5:38:00 AM

A nice way to describe the one you love(especially liked the last line"Intense skipping of my heart". Emilia

Date: 9/8/2010 3:51:00 AM

Such a nice take on the challenge Brandee-- you sure expressed that beauty in a guy well ;) -- nikko :)

Date: 8/30/2010 6:33:00 PM

My heart would pound too !!....hmmm, this is romantic and sensual ! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

Date: 8/30/2010 5:46:00 PM

Brandee, Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

Date: 8/30/2010 5:28:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Brandee

Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations Brandee on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Date: 8/29/2010 8:55:00 PM

Very nice Brandee,. Congratulations Love, Joyce

Date: 8/29/2010 7:33:00 PM

Love it , BRandee. Wish it could have scored even higher. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Date: 8/29/2010 6:49:00 PM

Congrats Brandee on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome as usual... enjoy your honor ..with luv..

Date: 8/27/2010 2:04:00 PM

AHHH, real beauty!! I have seen it too. Luv, Andrea

Date: 8/25/2010 6:55:00 PM

A wonderful description of beauty in motion, Brandee. Good luck

Date: 8/25/2010 3:25:00 PM

That sounds like true love, adoration of one who makes your heart skip a beat. Lovely tanka, Brandee. Best wishes, Carolyn