Beauty Can't Compete

Lingering rays of sunlight slowly die as scarlet burns the sky, where clouds ignite. And while the birds roost, bats begin to fly, capturing elusive moths in mid-flight. Luna hangs high in an ebony sky, spinning dreams into beams of golden light. And twinkling stars, like fireflies in the night, confetti the heavens, dazzling the eye. Like gold filigree, pinned to the darkness: galaxies adorn the heavens above, and shooting stars unzip the black of space. Yet, Man stands unabashed in His starkness, for Nature's beauty can't compete with love; an emotion intrinsic to His race.
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Date: 8/22/2018 4:11:00 PM
You capture such romance of the cosmos in this beautiful piece Emile! A work of art going into my faves! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 8/22/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2018 7:28:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Emile , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve PS , my word processor states mid-flight is one word, but I see soup says it is 2.. I myself would place a hyphen.
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I shall follow your advise my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/11/2018 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 8/12/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Susan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/11/2018 8:40:00 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Emile.
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Date: 8/11/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2018 10:35:00 AM
Wonderfully written Italian Sonnet Emile, congrats on POTD, very worthy write!
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Date: 8/10/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2018 2:58:00 AM
What poetic imagination, Emile! Wonderful images and congratulations on your win. ( Did you possibly mean 'pinned' to the darkness?)
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Date: 8/10/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, once more you have caught a typo and I am so pleased, Emile.
Date: 8/9/2018 9:39:00 AM
An ideal beauty of the cosmic marvelously depicted in your Sonnet! defined beauty that "can't compete with" undefined beauty of love! A great write Emile! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Be blessed.
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Besma, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Emile..Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 4:46:00 PM
Your vivid imagery ignites my imagination, Emile, as the beauty of your poetry dazzles me. Exquisite, especially your last three lines that express so splendidly the heart and soul of your sonnet. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan, I truly appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 4:14:00 PM
Lovely, Emile! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Emile with your beautifully written sonnet, a joy to read my friend. :))
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 4:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet Emile, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 11:23:00 AM
Emile, congrats on POTD for this beautiful cosmic sonnet. John
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Date: 8/8/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Jhon, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 10:37:00 AM
Lovely work Emile, congratulations on your honor...
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations to you!
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Date: 8/8/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 9:28:00 AM
A beautifully crafted sonnet and the imagery has wonderful depth as well. Congratulations on POTD, well deserved. RD
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Date: 8/8/2018 10:36:00 AM
Thanks RD, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 9:07:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 8/8/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Warren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 8:16:00 AM
Sweet ink Emile! Congratulations on potd! :) xomo
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 6:40:00 AM
Congrats!!! Emile on your POTD! with this enticing Italian Sonnet...Eh! molto bene...capish lol...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/8/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Winged Warrior, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2018 1:24:00 AM
Well I cant say I'm surprised Emile, back with congratulations on your wonderful sonnet being honoured with POTD. Tom
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Date: 8/8/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks again Tom, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2018 3:33:00 PM
The bats coming out to feed, great imagery Emile. A beautiful sonnet. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2018 12:10:00 PM
I especially like this beautiful poem, Emile. It just ignites my imagination. FAVED for sure.
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2018 11:54:00 AM
Truly a magnificent poem, a sonnet that is a deep and true pleasure to read my good friend! ALL so very good and the last stanza especially so... A fav...
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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