Beauty and the Burnt

His girl likes beaches and the sun
As a big part of summer’s fun.
Lovely with her golden tan
He’s  her most adoring fan.
She‘s lightly toasted, he’s well done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allison Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:11 PM
What a fun limerick Joyce, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Good one, Joyce! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:24 PM
this was so cute, Joyce. Congrats for your fine win in my contest.
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 6:08 PM
Well done in the sun, Joyce, just a pun. Smile. Agape, Moses
Grisetti Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 8:09 AM
I like the picture of the beach, except I'm usually 'well done' myself, and it hurts. i go to the beach in the winter, missing the crowds and the sun.
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March 18, 2012 at 8:22 PM
Joyce, this seems to be a very fun limerick... lol.. with the endin,, thank you for the smiles.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD
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