Beautiful Woman

true lady fair in her beauty
would you venture shadows along my company?
come beautiful woman
woman of Eden
throw your eyes of shaded violet into mine so unworthy
but you don't care do you beautiful woman?

follow me in the unknown sea of marmalade
there is an island of bliss ahead
it is there your name will be remembered
spoken by unknown lives and creatures that inhabit ancient lakes never seen by man

A paradise in a world out of world
Come along woman toned of heaven hue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Haick Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, Kolonji! Great write! Peace Audrey
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January 5, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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January 4, 2010 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kalonji. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Kalonji, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Knowles Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 11:05 PM
beautiful piece, strong imagery. do u use this to pick up women? lol
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December 29, 2008 at 4:32 PM
I am digging this piece a lot..Love the imagery and the clearness of the piece. wonderfully done.
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