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Beautiful Things

Beautiful things break
as readily as the brittlest rock
The quake rattled me;
your seismic words
unearthing the foundation
of this thing we’d built

Beautiful things shatter
like fragile china under feet
The tempest tore through me;
your rumbling thoughts
flung through the air
shrapnel slicing cartilage

Beautiful things ignite
as swift as finest kindling
The flames engulfed me;
it was your carelessness
doused in abandonment
setting our souls alight.

Beautiful things sink
like anchors of pure Osmium
And here it drowned me;
in a depth unknown
a depth I’d never thought to see
the deepest, darkest depths of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/24/2015 4:30:00 PM
Excellent poem. Osmium was a surprising addition, so I looked it up. Apt choice for a few reasons (aside from being the densest of the natural elements, it's also very brittle, very expensive, quite beautiful, and produces toxic vapors when oxidized.) Bravo, and a 7 from me.
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Adelheid Manefeldt
Date: 5/25/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much

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