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Beautiful Things

Beautiful things break as readily as the brittlest rock The quake rattled me; your seismic words unearthing the foundation of this thing we’d built Beautiful things shatter like fragile china under feet The tempest tore through me; your rumbling thoughts flung through the air shrapnel slicing cartilage Beautiful things ignite as swift as finest kindling The flames engulfed me; it was your carelessness doused in abandonment setting our souls alight. Beautiful things sink like anchors of pure Osmium And here it drowned me; in a depth unknown a depth I’d never thought to see the deepest, darkest depths of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/24/2015 4:30:00 PM
Excellent poem. Osmium was a surprising addition, so I looked it up. Apt choice for a few reasons (aside from being the densest of the natural elements, it's also very brittle, very expensive, quite beautiful, and produces toxic vapors when oxidized.) Bravo, and a 7 from me.
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Adelheid Manefeldt
Date: 5/25/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much

Book: Shattered Sighs