Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( A Whitney Duet) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Beach, above Clouds softly pass A band of geese fly high The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful spring Warms my heart Songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 November.06.2015

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/6/2015 7:23:00 AM

Hello Dear One "D" -- This one pulls at the emotional strings of one's heart. "Sunrise," as part of God Himself -- "His face shines upon my face." Outstanding Work!! and Perfect Pictures too!! A "7" + "FAV" absolutely. Cheers and Best Wishes Always, "G" (P.S. Check out, when you have time, "An Autumn Portrait of Beauty" that I just posted. I think you'll like it!!) Best!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/8/2015 2:32:00 PM

Hi there G! Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I truly appreciate it all, the 7, fav, and all the very wonderful comments you always leave me behind.You're always so very kind, G.I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem here about God and sunrise,etc, and that was written by me in this very nice poetry style called the "Whitney".You should try it sometimes, it is a very cool and neat poetry style to write poems with.I think you might like it a lot:)I already read n' commented on your beautiful poem.Thanks for letting me know about it, G:)Sending my love and prayers to you and Ingrid.Both take good care of each other now, okay :)Best to you always, G!Wishing you a very lovely week ahead!In His light!God bless you!:)D.