Beautiful Mystery

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Turned to Orion in a desert sky Pyramids of Giza are majestic. Preciseness of the stones can testify to a marvel that's pure mathematics. Pointing always to eternal heaven these monuments were tombs for kings and queens. World Wonder that's oldest of the seven determined to live on or so it seems. Many questions about the mystery how could these humans move gigantic stones? Could E.T.s have been in our history? We hunger with the beauty of unknowns. How tiny appears the Cairo vista against The Great Pyramids of Giza. 9/23/18 Beautiful mystery Poetry Contest John Hamilton, Sponsor

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/25/2018 1:38:00 AM

You chose an ideal topic for the beautiful mystery contest, Sian. I hope that these pyramids will not fall victim to terrorists who are on a mission to erase history, as happened in Iraq and Syria! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2018 6:10:00 PM

It's so very interesting. You chose a great mysterious topic to write about.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2018 7:56:00 PM

A beautifully written and thought provoking sonnet, Sian. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan