Beautiful Lies

Stark truth can be unkind and hard to hear,
Not always the best choice for someone dear.
A child who is not blessed with pulchritude,
Need not be told, that would be very rude.
If you must lie a bit to make her smile
That little lie may well be worth your while.
You may just find that tiny slip from truth,
When you have said the fairy has her tooth,
Will not be held against you in the end
Nor force you those wide stair steps to descend.
A lie that’s told for lovely, good intent
Is better than the truth with malice sent.

Weigh out your words is my heartfelt advice,
For sometimes truth is not extremely nice.

Won a second place in contest "Pen A Sonnet On It"

Contest ended 5/30/16 judged 6/16/16

A Shakespearean sonnet written in Iambic Pentameter


Philosophical theme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Joyce, Great Penned sonnet win.... SKAT
Selfa Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:31 AM
A great work all throughout Joyce! Congratulations! :) _Hans
Canerdy Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Wow! I love it. Every line is great, but "Nor force . . ." is especially great! Congrats on your well-deserved win. I know some brutally honest people that need to read this. (a fave) Janice
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May 31, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Don't forget to check out the blog....
Watt Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Wait, you mean the tooth fairy isn't real? Lovely sonnet, sweet message. I loved "Nor force you those wide stair steps to descend." Congrats!
Raina Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Wonderful sonnet with a message....congrats on your win!
Nau Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on your Second Placement for Pen a Sonnet On It!
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Joyce, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 3:15 PM
True and oh so cleverly written,,,,Congratulations on your win...
Deschler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 6:56 PM
I was very impressed by this poem, Joyce. And, I agree with every word of it. There are some things that our children are better off not knowing! A very nice write, Joyce. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
Britt Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Words of wisdom to live by. It is a very nice sonnet, in fine meter. It was my pleasure to read your poem. Blessings! Christopher
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Joyce a great message you've written in your wonderful sonnet. So true, so true. Congratulations on your fine win - Connie
Mehta Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,joyce
A  Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:14 AM
Joyce, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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February 25, 2014 at 3:08 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Joyce. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Hello Lovely Joyce ' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
A   Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 9:09 PM
JOYCE, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA
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