Beautiful In You

No handsome looks of movie stars
                           were ever mine to show
Those superficial privileges 
                             I wanted then to know

I wanted so to know the feel
                               of beauty’s silly pride
But then to face reality
                                the mirror never lied

And then one day you came along
                         to change my lonely fate
And loved the me of what I am
                              before it was too late

You taught me of the light of life,
                              of what I really cared
And how to feel about the world
                                        if I really dared

Amazing how, as I think back,
                you made my wish come true
Though not a movie star at all
                                 I’m beautiful in you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mcconnell Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Lovely piece Mike, with nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
Gentile Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Thank you so much Gordon!
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November 19, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Hello Gentile, congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy y9oyrnspeciaql day. I am also happy with your POTD. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo. /Darlene/ I hope all is well with you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, You are very welcome. . xxoo/Darlene/
Gentile Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Thank you so much xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 2:58 AM
True beauty lies within, belated congratulations to you Mike on the honour of potd ,hope you're keeping well. Tom
Gentile Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I hope you are very well indeed
Buhagiar Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:02 AM
I just wanted to say that I'm so happy with your POTD. One does not need to look like a film star to find love.
Gentile Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Thank you so much Victor!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Gorgeous! Back with congrats on POTD!
Gentile Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Thanks Kim, Happy Sunday xxoo
Rodgers Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Hello Mike, I am back to congratulate you on POTD! Autumn Blessings, Mike, Daniel
Gentile Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Daniel !
Oldham Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:40 AM
Nice, Mike!
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Thank you John !
Radice Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Excellent rhyming Mike and belated congratulations on POTD. Cheers - Gary
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:44 AM
Thank you so much Gary!!!
Alex Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 11:29 PM
"Though not a movie star at all I’m beautiful in you" - Very beautiful line and very beautiful poem as a whole. Congratulations!
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:44 AM
Thank you Christuraj!!
Greenhough Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Congratulations on POTD. This is truly a meaningful poem.
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:44 AM
Thank you so much Hilda!
Winter Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Congratulations on POTD :)
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Thank you again!
Winter Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Oh how beautiful this poem is! How beautiful! Wow! I love it ! True love is indeed so beautiful itself. What a wonderful experience it is to be a human and in love. Best, Anne
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Anne, thank you so much xxoo
Nicole Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. So true is this statement. Never let go of those that are able to look beyond the imperfections. Your thoughts are delicate and tender. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Brandy, thank you for your sweet inspirations xxoo
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November 14, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Such a lovely poem Mike, beauty comes from inside, especially when your heart’s open wide. Congratulations on having received the poem of the day award… Beryl
Gentile Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:42 AM
Thank you so much Beryl!
Wolf Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:37 AM
YOU ARE DA MAN OF THE HOUR! Now -- go take a shower! Congrats on POTD, Mike!
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Thank so much GW!!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Beautiful In You" write again. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Paula!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:52 AM
sorry I missed this poem when you posted...a bit busy here w/holiday prep. Your poem is engaging and enchanting, filled with humility. Congrats on your POTD designation.
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much Sara xxoo
George Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:42 AM
What noble thoughts are expressed here, dear Mike. External beauty is not something to be valued greatly. One's attitude and confidence give beauty to a person. I am happy for you that you found someone who could find beauty in you and who changed your concepts of beauty. Congratulations on your POTD honor.
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Messina Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:40 AM
Back to Congratulate you, my friend. Well deserved. Enjoy the day and have a great weekend. :)
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Thanks so much Charlie!
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Mike, a beautiful and sweet romantic poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Thank you Tania xxoo
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:30 AM
Hello Mike :-) Very nice! Congratulations on POTD!
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Thank you so much Abdullah!
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 1:29 AM
-Beautiful and romantic poem, Mike :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy the day - and the weekend :) - hugs
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo
Jones Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:36 AM
Awwww! So romantic! Congratulations on potd!
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Thank you so much Karen!!
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 9:27 PM
A beautiful poem for sure, Mike. FAVE'd.
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Thank you Lin xxoo
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 8:35 PM
What a poem! Totally realistic -- and yet so stirring and inspirational at the very same time. Bravo, Mike. A Fave for me. Thanks, Gershon
Gentile Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so much GW!!
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