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Beautiful Frivolous Queen

Beautiful, frivolous queen bided her time. The castle stood tall and strong. Silence reigned. No one dared to speak. Below the enemy had gathered ready for a fight. A little soldier thought he was just a pawn in the hands of the King. Someone sent him a message. He moved forwards towards the enemy. The queen frowned and moved sideways towards the edge of the defence. Consternation rose up. Was it a wise move? Everyone looked at her regalia, her splendid crown, her painted face with verdant leaves and eyelashes glittering. Immediately the bishop intervened. Some soldiers fell, the battle fierce. Time passed and the black knight took his position, near his lovely queen he stood, for he had to protect her from all ails. Alas that left the King on his own. Another knight and bishop intervened. But the opponent king was astute and steadfast. One move and a high cry was uttered. Checkmate. And all the little pieces fell in disarray upon the chequered board.

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Date: 5/30/2022 2:37:00 PM
A wonderful creation, this story. Well crafted and a great read; I do love chess.
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Date: 5/23/2022 10:11:00 AM
Chess comes alive with your telling. Shalom shalom dear Victor. Be well
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Date: 5/23/2022 6:22:00 AM
Superb writing Victor! My husband taught our granddaughter and she is teaching me to play. I love all the pieces and the strategy it takes to play a good game of chess. Very creative my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2022 4:52:00 PM
cute personification of chess game, Victor. It's a game I would never care to learn! The title really drew me in.
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Date: 5/20/2022 4:20:00 PM
I don't know much about chess but I know enough to know this is a chess game which is probably metaphoric work about a real war going on. I enjoyed reading it today. I am glad that I chose it to read. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/20/2022 9:40:00 AM
Fabulous story , Victor, I haven't play chess in years.
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Date: 5/19/2022 4:24:00 PM
Truly so clever Victor, the poetry and the game superb.
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Date: 5/19/2022 5:40:00 AM
Love your chess board! Nicely done! Brought the queen to life. Love the end too - And all the little pieces fell in disarray upon the chequered board.
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Date: 5/18/2022 2:38:00 PM
lol I love the way you play the game dear King, :)
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Date: 5/18/2022 1:51:00 PM
I love the way you wove this tale, Victor. As I read, I slowly began to suspect that it was all a game of chess. This is in my faves. :)
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Date: 5/18/2022 10:12:00 AM
A very creative write Victor, love the ending. Tom
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Date: 5/18/2022 6:38:00 AM
What a surprise ending to a beautiful tale, a well crafted poem Victor, amazing… Belle
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Date: 5/18/2022 5:22:00 AM
It takes a man of your creative talents to spin a story from chess game. Splendidly done, Victor.
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Date: 5/18/2022 5:18:00 AM
Chess ~ a game I enjoy playing, blitz mostly. Intriguingly crafted, Victor
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Date: 5/18/2022 4:26:00 AM
From the game of chess, you have fabricated a beautiful story ! Very clever, Victor !
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Date: 5/18/2022 4:16:00 AM
Your inspiration is clearly still very much alive and working, Victor, and it is one of the many reasons why I like and respect you as a creative person. Your poetry is a reflection of the grace and wisdom that you possess; this is a great chess-related poem that is personified brilliantly.
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Date: 5/18/2022 3:16:00 AM
What a clever idea, very enjoyable..Delice
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Date: 5/18/2022 1:49:00 AM
Fabulous chess related poem beautifully personfied:-) hugs Jan xx
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