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Beautiful Fall

B eautiful balmy afternoons beneath a breezy sky
E namored enchantment of exquisite extravagance
A cross abstract patterns of audacious affinity
U nique and unfathomable ultramarine highlights
T antalizing the temperamental ticklish temptress
I ntimidating intrepid and intoxicating
F inespun fiery potpourri of flamboyant foliage
U nveiling ulterior unfamiliarities
L anguishing a luxuriously lavish love affair

F emme Fatale forever fickle frivolous facetious
A utumn's audaciously awestruck amorous arousal
L amenting the loss of loveliest luminous layers
L iberating legendary lethargic lullabies



AP: 1st place 2022, 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on September 8, 2018 for contest BEAUTIFUL FALL sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 5TH
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Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Amazing! What a terrific poem. Congrats 0
Hinshaw Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Comgrats, Line for this well-deserved win and thx for your fine comment on my win - Bob
Gauthier Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Thanks, Robert, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Murray Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:25 AM
You certainly are a ticklish temptress with this one Line. I love it! Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much, Jean, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Your last stanza really makes this acrostic even more exceptional Line. Beautifully composed! Congratulations on your win! : )
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Connie. Most appreciated.
Ibeh Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Wow, this amazing poem is both an acrostic and alliteration! Congrats on your win, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Edward.
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Alliteration storm warning!!! Wow thanks for this memorable entry Line!
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, John, for hosting this fun contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:40 AM
This seems like an acrostic alliteration masterpiece to me, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. You are too kind.
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