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Beautiful Creatures

meow meow i called the kitten who have never eaten and i say meow meow arf arf barked the dog who got jealous and he say arf arf tweet tweet birds that fly greeted Hi and they sing tweet tweet creak creak who could have made all of them made me smile heart's overwhelm swish swish fish on the pond flapped their tails and they go swish swish roar roar and we got scared the mighty lion rumbled roar roar hiss hiss a snake came out the bushes and goes hiss hiss broom broom as I drive over the wilderness broom broom we've all seen the masterpiece now I wonder who is the great artist?

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Hilo Poet

Date: 9/20/2024 6:31:00 PM

Wonderment momentarily lull’s, ought respite surrendiptous a favoring, teneble in the Onomatopoeia aspect version lain in its wake to reverberate the intended relevancy of its true sounds in this world of living voices. An admirable post of positivity that seldons that part of the world and that you, Beata, and another Filipina Nette, are the rare exceptions of your fellow countrymen and women. Aloha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/28/2024 6:53:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kabayan. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.