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Beautiful Butterfly

Perfect symmetry on jewelled wings
Flutter by beautiful butterfly
Floating free on zephyr winds
Like an aerial acrobat sent from on high

08~12~15
Contest: Butterflies Among Us
Sponsor: SKAT

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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October 10, 2015 at 3:00 PM

Butterflies and Roses simply delight my eyes so so much. It's why I've written about them whether light or dark. Love this Jan, your so on my wave length girl, please us remains so. Olive and you throw my mind out there, gosh I so love that ~ James xxxx

October 10, 2015 at 4:06 PM

Thanks James I love the image and the imagery here I am working so hard on my imagery trying my best to improve:-) hugs Jan xx

August 26, 2015 at 9:09 AM

Jan, simple very beautiful write.

August 26, 2015 at 9:42 AM

Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

August 23, 2015 at 12:55 PM

HI Jan. Congratulations on your win for this beauty! hugs!

August 23, 2015 at 12:58 PM

Thanks Kim;-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 21, 2015 at 1:30 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win Jan with this amazing write!

August 21, 2015 at 1:33 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

August 19, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Congratulations Jan! Hugs Rick.

August 19, 2015 at 5:51 PM

Thanks Richard:-)hugs Jan xx

August 19, 2015 at 12:20 AM

Congrats Dear Jan on your butterfly win! ....love, Anu:-)

August 19, 2015 at 4:00 AM

Thanks so much Anu:-) hugs jan xx

August 18, 2015 at 9:00 AM

Congrats on your elegant win

August 18, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Thanks so much Dave:-) hugs Jan xx

August 18, 2015 at 7:35 AM

Wonderful write Jan...Congrats on your win

August 18, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

August 18, 2015 at 12:25 AM

JAN, Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love

August 18, 2015 at 4:49 AM

Oh thanks so much Skat the theme was so so wonderful I adore butterflies ( and of course dragonflies too):-) hugs jan xxx

Constance La France

August 16, 2015 at 11:24 AM

Jan a beautiful poem and image for the contest a7 and thanks for visiting my shade poem

August 16, 2015 at 11:59 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs jan xx

August 14, 2015 at 9:30 PM

Beautiful description of the butterfly,wonderful pen a 7 Hugs Eve

August 15, 2015 at 3:51 AM

Thanks Eve your poem was delightful and I loved the picture too:-) hugs Jan xx

August 14, 2015 at 7:08 PM

Ms Flutterby aerial acrobat I hope you catch the rope!

August 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Edlynn I do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

August 14, 2015 at 2:32 PM

Ohh neat..what a fun write for a fun flight of a butter fly :)

August 14, 2015 at 2:37 PM

Just a short sweet write Cas :-) hugs jan xx

August 13, 2015 at 12:19 PM

Beautiful write Jan...good look in the contest...

August 13, 2015 at 12:34 PM

Thanks Joseph - just wish we had those beautiful butterflies in the picture on the Island:-) hugs jan xx

August 13, 2015 at 7:48 AM

Hello Jan!! A lovely imaged-filled write here. Best of Luck in SKAT's contest. This should be a top-notch entry for sure. Butterflies are such a wonderful theme. A "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

August 13, 2015 at 11:58 AM

Thanks Gary yes the butterfly theme seems to be very popular with the poets here:-) hugs jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 9:11 PM

G'day Jan... nice description of a welcome friend to our gardens - thank you Jan - Lindsay

August 13, 2015 at 1:32 AM

Thanks so much Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

August 12, 2015 at 4:55 PM

magical pen Jan hugs 7

August 12, 2015 at 5:03 PM

Aw thanks Shadow I wrote it yesterday at the pub in Dublin where I wrote the crying candle poem for dad last year:-) hugs jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 4:42 PM

Jan, this is a like lovely butterfly. Great job. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis P.S. Did you post you and Darren's latest collaboration?

August 12, 2015 at 4:51 PM

Yes I posted our first poem in about 14 months under the name Jadazzle united - it is called jumping for joy:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 12, 2015 at 3:17 PM

I love your integration of words and picture. Best of luck!

August 12, 2015 at 3:32 PM

Thanks Dave Hugs jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Lovely poem, Jan; this will grow wings and fly high! Hugs // paul

August 12, 2015 at 3:31 PM

I can live in hope Paul - we will wait and see:-) hugs Jan xx

Milton Robertson

August 12, 2015 at 1:52 PM

A lovely poem. The beauty comes from within. Enough to win...

August 12, 2015 at 2:07 PM

Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Thank you Jan for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.rgds Brian (also see my soupmail to you)

August 12, 2015 at 12:26 PM

Thank you for the lovely mail Brian - you are in my thoughts and prayers:-) hugs Jan xx

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

August 12, 2015 at 11:02 AM

Perfect! Best of luck for the contest :)

August 12, 2015 at 12:26 PM

Thanks for dropping by Anoucheka:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 12, 2015 at 10:35 AM

SUPERB! and a seven, dear Jan. Good luck!

August 12, 2015 at 3:48 PM

Thanks for your feedback - I did appreciate it:-) hugs Jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 12:25 PM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

August 12, 2015 at 10:20 AM

Beautiful gem.of a poem:-) all the best dear Jan!

August 12, 2015 at 12:25 PM

Thanks Anu:-) hugs jan xx

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