Beautiful As Daisies

She was Rachel, beautiful as her name and in all ways.
In innocence, caught up in “grown up, worldly things
Folks who knew her laughed it off took is as if a joke
At a loss to grasp the deeper meaning behind it all
Her parents were alarmed and sought to reinforce their rules
But it seemed it was too late to remedy this state
It’s so hard to understand how this change came about
One moment she was their baby, the next, a stranger in their midst
This tragedy could not have been any part of God’s plan
Lost, running away, leaving behind comfort and warmth
She, instead would hitch-hike her way to live as a stray
Rachel and her friends never envisioned the many dangers
For lack of better judgment, with her life she would pay
He seemed like an average “Joe”, wearing a jacket of softest leather
She thought, ‘He’s hot and dressed fine; no way could he be whack’
Inexperience and temperament silently urged her on
Repressed anger held fast as she played a game of dice
She’d been waiting at the gas station just off Route Seventy Seven 
Many hours past, as she mulled over random thoughts
Cold, tired and hungry, it was getting late as panic took a seat

Contn'd Pg. 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Oimbo Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 1:28 AM
this is a wonderful free verse
Neels Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 12:30 AM
Off to No 2 I go, would be interesting to see where this goes :) love Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Captivating work..Got my attention and held on..Youth can be so naive...Great topic chosen..Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:32 AM
This is compelling, Annalise. On to Page Two!
Mannan Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:47 AM
You have got me interested here. I definately will go the next part.
George   Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 4:52 AM
I am going on to the next part. Very good so far. Lainie
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