Beautiful Affection

Yes! I become frail 
Yes! You pushed me hard 
Yes! I fall; 
Yes! You made me stronger, 
To the point that i think you are fortuitous, 
I pray, I pray you to be the one 
When you feel betrayed; 
I heard Love turns into a antagonism and a curse, 
To the point, I feel you are blessed 
I still pray for you; to be happy 
Yes! I cried.. I sob 
Yes! You made me feel worse 
Yes! I missed you 
Yes! You made me who i am. 
To the point, you are admired 
I pray, I pray you to be blissful, 
Now that, you are gone I feel, what was so exemplary about you? 
I still pray for you to get what you want.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:03 PM
ASMA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
Memon Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 2:16 PM
thankyou so much. If you use instagram don't forget to follow me over there @lifeisinyou
Carney Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Time for a comeback and more poems. Yes~ Thomas
Memon Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 2:16 PM
yes sure. :)
Boddie Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 4:57 PM
what a Lovely way to explain....how Love affects the brain....because It flows from the heart....and when problems arrive, the mind suffers a blood clot....;)
A  Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 11:30 PM
ASMA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Gulley Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 1:39 PM
A forgiving and a deep loving poem. Sometimes a sad love makes us stronger, in ways we can never imagine, until we have grown spiritually above and beyond it. Awesome write and congrats on being Featured. Sharon G.
Memon Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 3:30 PM
Yes thats true. But sometimes in this sad phase you uncover the best qualities of yours too. Kind regards, Xmma Memon. :)
Dome Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 3:54 AM
A sad but very well expressed poem. I'm so sorry you feel like this. you sound a lovely person. You are in my prayers. Thank you for sharing best wishes. Pete.
Memon Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 3:28 PM
thankyou peter.
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:03 AM
You want all the best for the one who let you down and hurt you! Not many people are capable of reacting like this; you are strong willed! I hope that whoever the subject of these words is, will read them and realize what a great person he has lost. // paul
Memon Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:42 PM
I'm pleased by reading your comment. People will realize eventually. So, it really doesn't matter much when you spread positivity. Thankyou so much.
Breidenthal Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Aweesome piece and I love the passionate patterns. It seems that despite the pain inflicted, the poet wishes the best for their love..a bittersweet testament of devotion! Always,Laura
Memon Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Thanks Laura.
Pinet Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Well said. It is a testament to your sensitive heart that two people's hearts can part and yet still recognize each other as friends. Emile.
Memon Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Sometimes more than friends. Thanks Emile.
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