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Beautiful Affection

Yes! I become frail Yes! You pushed me hard Yes! I fall; Yes! You made me stronger, To the point that i think you are fortuitous, I pray, I pray you to be the one When you feel betrayed; I heard Love turns into a antagonism and a curse, To the point, I feel you are blessed I still pray for you; to be happy Yes! I cried.. I sob Yes! You made me feel worse Yes! I missed you Yes! You made me who i am. To the point, you are admired I pray, I pray you to be blissful, Now that, you are gone I feel, what was so exemplary about you? I still pray for you to get what you want.

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Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:03:00 PM

ASMA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Asma Memon
Date: 1/24/2016 2:16:00 PM

thankyou so much. If you use instagram don't forget to follow me over there @lifeisinyou

Thomas Carney

Date: 12/14/2015 8:53:00 AM

Time for a comeback and more poems. Yes~ Thomas

Asma Memon
Date: 1/24/2016 2:16:00 PM

yes sure. :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/10/2015 4:57:00 PM

what a Lovely way to explain....how Love affects the brain....because It flows from the heart....and when problems arrive, the mind suffers a blood clot....;)

Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 11:30:00 PM

ASMA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Sharon Gulley

Date: 6/2/2015 1:39:00 PM

A forgiving and a deep loving poem. Sometimes a sad love makes us stronger, in ways we can never imagine, until we have grown spiritually above and beyond it. Awesome write and congrats on being Featured. Sharon G.

Asma Memon
Date: 6/25/2015 3:30:00 PM

Yes thats true. But sometimes in this sad phase you uncover the best qualities of yours too. Kind regards, Xmma Memon. :)

Peter Dome

Date: 5/15/2015 3:54:00 AM

A sad but very well expressed poem. I'm so sorry you feel like this. you sound a lovely person. You are in my prayers. Thank you for sharing best wishes. Pete.

Asma Memon
Date: 6/25/2015 3:28:00 PM

thankyou peter.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2015 8:03:00 AM

You want all the best for the one who let you down and hurt you! Not many people are capable of reacting like this; you are strong willed! I hope that whoever the subject of these words is, will read them and realize what a great person he has lost. // paul

Asma Memon
Date: 5/14/2015 3:42:00 PM

I'm pleased by reading your comment. People will realize eventually. So, it really doesn't matter much when you spread positivity. Thankyou so much.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/1/2015 8:43:00 PM

Aweesome piece and I love the passionate patterns. It seems that despite the pain inflicted, the poet wishes the best for their love..a bittersweet testament of devotion! Always,Laura

Asma Memon
Date: 5/14/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thanks Laura.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/1/2015 10:50:00 AM

Well said. It is a testament to your sensitive heart that two people's hearts can part and yet still recognize each other as friends. Emile.

Asma Memon
Date: 5/14/2015 3:43:00 PM

Sometimes more than friends. Thanks Emile.