Beautiful Affection

Yes! I become frail 
Yes! You pushed me hard 
Yes! I fall; 
Yes! You made me stronger, 
To the point that i think you are fortuitous, 
I pray, I pray you to be the one 
When you feel betrayed; 
I heard Love turns into a antagonism and a curse, 
To the point, I feel you are blessed 
I still pray for you; to be happy 
Yes! I cried.. I sob 
Yes! You made me feel worse 
Yes! I missed you 
Yes! You made me who i am. 
To the point, you are admired 
I pray, I pray you to be blissful, 
Now that, you are gone I feel, what was so exemplary about you? 
I still pray for you to get what you want.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/14/2016 10:03:00 PM
ASMA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/24/2016 2:16:00 PM
thankyou so much. If you use instagram don't forget to follow me over there @lifeisinyou
Date: 12/14/2015 8:53:00 AM
Time for a comeback and more poems. Yes~ Thomas
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Date: 1/24/2016 2:16:00 PM
yes sure. :)
Date: 9/10/2015 4:57:00 PM
what a Lovely way to explain....how Love affects the brain....because It flows from the heart....and when problems arrive, the mind suffers a blood clot....;)
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:30:00 PM
ASMA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/2/2015 1:39:00 PM
A forgiving and a deep loving poem. Sometimes a sad love makes us stronger, in ways we can never imagine, until we have grown spiritually above and beyond it. Awesome write and congrats on being Featured. Sharon G.
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Date: 6/25/2015 3:30:00 PM
Yes thats true. But sometimes in this sad phase you uncover the best qualities of yours too. Kind regards, Xmma Memon. :)
Date: 5/15/2015 3:54:00 AM
A sad but very well expressed poem. I'm so sorry you feel like this. you sound a lovely person. You are in my prayers. Thank you for sharing best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 6/25/2015 3:28:00 PM
thankyou peter.
Date: 5/6/2015 8:03:00 AM
You want all the best for the one who let you down and hurt you! Not many people are capable of reacting like this; you are strong willed! I hope that whoever the subject of these words is, will read them and realize what a great person he has lost. // paul
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Date: 5/14/2015 3:42:00 PM
I'm pleased by reading your comment. People will realize eventually. So, it really doesn't matter much when you spread positivity. Thankyou so much.
Date: 5/1/2015 8:43:00 PM
Aweesome piece and I love the passionate patterns. It seems that despite the pain inflicted, the poet wishes the best for their love..a bittersweet testament of devotion! Always,Laura
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Date: 5/14/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Laura.
Date: 5/1/2015 10:50:00 AM
Well said. It is a testament to your sensitive heart that two people's hearts can part and yet still recognize each other as friends. Emile.
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Date: 5/14/2015 3:43:00 PM
Sometimes more than friends. Thanks Emile.
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