Beautiful Butterflies - the Unity Style

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~Beautiful Butterflies~ (Unity) Growing Feeding Changing From eggs to adults Seeping Breeding Flying With nice colors Mating Sensing Pausing Feed from flowers Living Migrating Soaring They're good fliers From eggs to adults With nice colors Feed from flowers They're good fliers. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 August.19.2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2016 3:34:00 PM

beautiful poem and imagery like the way the 4 lines are repeated to make a separate stanza - what a fascinating form you have brought to us Dorian:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/20/2016 11:21:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Jan , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:))Hugs!D