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Beautiful Sunrise - The Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Whitney Duet ) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Sea, above Clouds softly pass A band of seagulls fly high. The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful spring Warms my heart Songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012
January.11.2017 ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Date: 1/19/2017 8:45:00 AM
Very sun drenched poetry. Very well done, Dorian. Has me soaking in the sun on this cloudy, Michigan winter day. Congrats on POTW. A wonderful, Whitney style poem. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 1/18/2017 8:34:00 PM
Whatever the style, I truly love this poem. Congrats on your POTW!
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Date: 1/16/2017 7:42:00 AM
Lovely Imagery. Loved it.
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Date: 1/13/2017 1:20:00 PM
I like your poem.I seldom have seen a sunrise. But I have seen a lot of sunsets.Also beautiful to watch. You wrote a beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/11/2017 4:21:00 PM
beautiful imagery Dorian I love watching the sun rise and set the colours are so stunning:-) hugs jan xx
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