Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Whitney Duet ) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Sea, above Clouds softly pass A band of seagulls fly high. The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful spring Warms my heart Songbirds sings His love shines upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 July.20.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/31/2017 11:11:00 AM

Beautiful poem, beautiful poet I meet you again. Our common friend Mark Twain also said that wrinkles should show only the places were were smiles.Indeed, wonderful spring, wonderful verses warm our heart. For no moment, a common heart can bit in your work and in the hand of light.Beautiful Sunrise.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/31/2017 6:11:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Ovidiu, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my " Beautiful Sunrise" poem:) Most kind of you to say all that! Nice to have you around again for a visit.Time flies!:)I'm so happy that you liked this one:)I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D