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Beautiful or Broken Words Contest   ~   August 22, 2023

                      Sponsored by Constance La France

Beautiful

"Everything holds a tinge of beauty, something unique,
but not everyone recognizes something beautiful."
                                                              ~ by poet

Some of the most beautiful things in the world
are those that are visually impossible to see...
A fern frond that we can feel, not yet uncurled
Mated doves cooing, "Come to me, my love"
Or lofty wind in a canvas sail when it's unfurled

Promises of a pewter sky when rain's sorely needed
Swaddled newborns while dreaming in slumber 
Starlight skies when the view is not impeded
Or fine fertile soil of this Earth in shades of umber
And polished pearls when oysters are seeded

The obvious sunrise morns and sunset twiights
A soul that was lost, then found its way back
Wavering hues of colors from the Northern lights
Pretty, a flower, growing in a sidewalk crack
Crystalized snowflakes and other wintry delights

Beauty can exist inside a good person's heart
In the prismed colors radiating from waterfalls
And at the greeting of lovers who have been apart
It's found in lost friendships by tearing down walls
Realizing life can be happy again with a fresh start

Our sweetest memories, when in dreams we drift
Smiles endowed to strangers who wear a frown
That may be what they needed to give them a lift
The glowing face of a bride, in her wedding gown
And how beautiful the offer of forgiveness as a gift
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La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:57 PM
Lin, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image and quote, Constance
Lindley Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 6:50 AM
My good friend, you just penned beauty in its depths, power and glory. If only everybody saw it as that! Yes, true beauty has no guile, no hate, no evil in it. Sad that we humans cannot be or see this way. A truly golden poem. A fav.. God bless you,
Alex Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:28 PM
"how beautiful the offer of forgiveness as a gift" - A beautiful writing as usual. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Beautiful" again. Great Job... Have a great day writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Your "Beautiful" is a Beautiful/Wonderful write/ending. "Love It" Great Quote. "Good Luck" I put mine in. Have a great day............
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 3:04 AM
I'm always grateful for your comments, Paula.
Narain Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Beautiful poem. Full of imagery and meaning of beautiful,
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Thanks a lot, Jay.
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Such a skillfully-written, vividly descriptive piece, full of expressive images. Janice
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:37 AM
I'm sincerely appreciative of your kind remarks. Thank you, Janice.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:43 AM
So beautiful Lin, every word, every line, simply sublime… Belle
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Your sweet comments are of great value to me, Belle. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:39 PM
- Beautifully written, Lin ... every day is a new start ... a new chapter in life :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:51 AM
You're right, Anne-Lise. That's why I enjoy the newness of an early morning, watching the sunrise to shine light around me gives hope to each new day. Thanks for leaving your fine comments.
Cunningham Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:29 PM
So much beauty everywhere, sometimes we just have to open our hearts and eyes to see it. Good luck in the contest. Wishing you safe travels and calm seas. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Thanks, Tom. We often look for beauty on some grand scale and overlook the simplest form of it. It can be found anywhere if we only do as you say.
Seeker Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:23 PM
Oh wow! A clear fav! Thanks for sharing this sublime poetry with us all, dear Lin
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:48 AM
I'm touched by the kind compliments of your words, Seeker. Thanks for them and the fav.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:01 PM
An incredibly beautiful poem, Dear Poet. I am mesmerized! Love ~ Mala
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so very much, Mala.
Flood Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:52 PM
I would just like to say what a lovely poem this is, Lin… but that would mean being all soppy and stuff… and I’m a real geezer ain’t I? So I’ll just say, “That’s all right, that is. Sheesh… between you and Deb my reputation is gonna go to hell in a handcart! ;-)
Flood Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 3:45 PM
I think the expression is ‘banged to rights’… I shall grow a big bushy beard and wear dark glasses from now on.
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Too late, you've already written your thoughts and you're not soppy nor a geezer. You're a man who's not afraid to say what he feels, and that gives you integrity in my eyes. Your reputation could never be damaged by any niceties Deb, or I could write. Humor, and now sentimentality are qualities I admire in you and in anyone. Now, do I sound soppy?
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:28 PM
simply beautiful in every sense of the word Lin, a massive fave:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Thanks for thinking of it as beautiful, Jan as well as for faving it. hugs.
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