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beating the rain splashing out some bling as raindrops disintegrate on hummingbird wing By David Kavanagh

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/3/2024 1:53:00 AM

Perfect haiku. Loved your imagery.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/20/2024 3:38:00 AM

Thank you Victor, was a nice picture to interpret!

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/30/2024 11:11:00 AM

This one is very sweet, you've captured its purity, "beating the rain" humorous. Beautiful photo. Precious, David. You are a sweet poet. Cheers

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/1/2024 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Anaya, we all have a little sweet side to us, regardless of our approach to poetry, I’m taking a break from the soup, hopefully be back in a couple of weeks, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2024 3:30:00 PM

wonderful poem and accompanying picture, hope you feel better soon David:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/30/2024 1:57:00 AM

Thanks Jan, think I’m getting there slowly but surely, unlike the hummingbird in my haiku, hope you’re keeping well too, cheers David

Karen Jones

Date: 6/29/2024 2:16:00 PM

Great photo and I love the haiku!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/29/2024 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Caren, the photo was way too good not to post, and seems to capture the moment I had in my head perfectly, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 6/29/2024 2:26:00 AM

A very clever title, David. Ya know I love rhyming, even in a Haiku.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2024 3:48:00 AM

oh, I'm sad to learn you haven't been well. It's a gem of a Haiku. Hope you feel better soon. Hugs.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/29/2024 3:32:00 AM

I had this one in mind for Tania’’s contest, unfortunately I’m out of sorts at the moment, and missed the deadline, but thought it worth posting anyway, thanks so much Lin, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2024 4:10:00 PM

pretty :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/29/2024 3:30:00 AM

Thanks Kim