Beat Me Dead

i ache all over
i can hardly breathe
do i dare take another step?
my spine is crooked
and my throat so dry
that blood pours out of my mouth
im covered in scars
and broken bones create me
bruises lace my skin
and fear running through my veins
this is too much pain.
i scream out in the night
begging for an escape
the fists that have impact
as strong as a hammer
create within me, a phobia.
the stairs are too close
don't walk down without checking
because the pain may come quick
and the scars will last ages.
maybe im clumsy
or maybe he's mad
either way im just
hurt
broken and
scared.
do i dare disobey?
my heart is finally giving out
and my lungs shriveling inside of me
this is the part where i die.
pushed down the stairs
or beaten to the ground
im no longer bruised by you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/9/2010 2:24:00 PM
Holy shit! this brought back bad visions...it's a great poem though......nikki
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:07:00 AM
this is a tough one. i feel it. i hope your not living it. try to escape before you kill. john
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