Bean Awhile

b'in thinkin
off and on
of things

that seem knot
and so go as noise
but are the background

irrational irregulars
without a reality order
but for a geometry in chaos

that is  our reality
as just a way of acting
patterns of supposed sense

why hast thou forsaken me
were the messangers last words
before dying of a broken heart

is
god
real


stan sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 10/8/2021 11:13:00 AM
Brilliance is thine, Stan… Miss you! Where are you, my friend? Hugs, sally
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Date: 6/7/2021 1:41:00 PM
Jesus didn't promise those who choose to follow Him an easy road. He promised that when times are tough He will be there to see us through it. And though He died on the cross for us and the stupid things we do, He rose again to conquer death and every other thing the devil can throw at us. Take Heart. He's Coming Back Soon! God Bless, (and He is real) JB (i know He's real because He walks with me every day.)
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:21:00 PM
....hey man/er mame : ) .....just stating what many believe ......andt....that does not mean anything be......asunder?! stan
Date: 5/18/2021 9:48:00 AM
Aw but we believe God raised him and hadn't forsaken him. All messengers of God faced more trials and tribulations. You wrote a superb wry wondering poem and its ok to feel despondent sometimes but never stay hopeless fir long. Kudos!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:24:00 PM
....my point was not based on social religious belief(s).... no.....rather, it was from a neutrality position.... stan
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