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b'in thinkin off and on of things that seem knot and so go as noise but are the background irrational irregulars without a reality order but for a geometry in chaos that is our reality as just a way of acting patterns of supposed sense why hast thou forsaken me were the messangers last words before dying of a broken heart is god real stan sand

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/8/2021 11:13:00 AM

Brilliance is thine, Stan… Miss you! Where are you, my friend? Hugs, sally

Judy Ball

Date: 6/7/2021 1:41:00 PM

Jesus didn't promise those who choose to follow Him an easy road. He promised that when times are tough He will be there to see us through it. And though He died on the cross for us and the stupid things we do, He rose again to conquer death and every other thing the devil can throw at us. Take Heart. He's Coming Back Soon! God Bless, (and He is real) JB (i know He's real because He walks with me every day.)

Sand Blown
Date: 7/8/2021 6:21:00 PM

....hey man/er mame : ) .....just stating what many believe ......andt....that does not mean anything be......asunder?! stan

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/18/2021 9:48:00 AM

Aw but we believe God raised him and hadn't forsaken him. All messengers of God faced more trials and tribulations. You wrote a superb wry wondering poem and its ok to feel despondent sometimes but never stay hopeless fir long. Kudos!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Sand Blown
Date: 7/8/2021 6:24:00 PM

....my point was not based on social religious belief(s).... no.....rather, it was from a neutrality position.... stan