Notes About The Poem

beached

tears and fears
fill moonless nights
their pooled regrets
not washed away

nostalgic longings
in hindsight of the shell 
of what might have
could have been

persistent clouds 
hover heavy dark
creeping smothering
extinguishing all light

hurtful lashings 
of idle tongues
whipping thrashing
leave their scars

sum total
the days the nights
unfurl their drama
wind up marooned
on the beach of life


AP: 2nd place 2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Woods Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Love the beach metaphors and the lashing tongues that leave scars... so true. Don't forget how beautiful scars are, showing strength and fortitude! Xoxo
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Words of wisdom, Crystol ~ thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment
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