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tears and fears fill moonless nights their pooled regrets not washed away nostalgic longings in hindsight of the shell of what might have could have been persistent clouds hover heavy dark creeping smothering extinguishing all light hurtful lashings of idle tongues whipping thrashing leave their scars sum total the days the nights unfurl their drama wind up marooned on the beach of life AP: 2nd place 2024 Posted on August 8, 2024

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Date: 8/10/2024 7:56:00 AM
Love the beach metaphors and the lashing tongues that leave scars... so true. Don't forget how beautiful scars are, showing strength and fortitude! Xoxo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 8:27:00 AM
Words of wisdom, Crystol ~ thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment

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